I have an idea for a story, but not sure if it's okay to publish on Literotica.

[Wolfblackthorne]

I have an idea for a story I want to write and publish on Literotica, but I'm unsure if it's suitable here. Yes, I have read the guidelines twice. I just prefer to ask a person.
My idea revolves around the new law that has been passed. The law makes it so males need a female guardian. The guardian in the story arrives at a young man's house. He is 22 years old. He lives alone. The guardian proceeds to tell him he needs her to look after him and take care of things. He refuses at first, citing that he is a grown man. The guardian doesn't give up and proceeds to drug him with milk and to retrain him to be her helpless ward. There would be pacifiers, bottle feeding, and mind control involved.

Would this be acceptable to publish on Literotica, or does this break a rule? I would rather ask before doing something wrong.

Thanks for any reply. Sorry if this is a stupid question..

 

[YmaOHyd]

Fine, as far as I know, assuming everyone is of age.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

That would seem to be fine, as long as you don't add forbidden things like snuff.

--Annie

 

[ElectricBlue]

I have an idea for a story I want to write and publish on Literotica, but I'm unsure if it's suitable here. Yes, I have read the guidelines twice. I just prefer to ask a person.
My idea revolves around the new law that has been passed. The law makes it so males need a female guardian. The guardian in the story arrives at a young man's house. He is 22 years old. He lives alone. The guardian proceeds to tell him he needs her to look after him and take care of things. He refuses at first, citing that he is a grown man. The guardian doesn't give up and proceeds to drug him with milk and to retrain him to be her helpless ward. There would be pacifiers, bottle feeding, and mind control involved.

Would this be acceptable to publish on Literotica, or does this break a rule? I would rather ask before doing something wrong.

Thanks for any reply. Sorry if this is a stupid question..

Publish in Mind Control, make sure that the infantilisation is clearly an adult being affected.

If you write the character as child-like, the story will most likely get rejected for breaching the eighteen year age rule. You'll need to watch your wording - even a short phrase that's ambiguous will trigger a word bot looking for under age references or under age actions.

 

[Wolfblackthorne]

Okay, thank you for the reply. I'll need to think this one over.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Since you're already going into an alternate reality of sorts, do it without the drugging. Example, the Caretakers are a form of Empath and can sense certain things about their charges. They can use that to mold a new life for both.

 

[SamanthaBehgs]

Since you're already going into an alternate reality of sorts, do it without the drugging. Example, the Caretakers are a form of Empath and can sense certain things about their charges. That can use that to mold a new life for both.

Or you could research the historical creation of Zombies and use the same methods that have been used in the past.


Don't you also have to make sure he eventually enjoys and embraces his role in order for it to pass the rule test as well?

 

[TheWritingGroup]

Since you're already going into an alternate reality of sorts, do it without the drugging. Example, the Caretakers are a form of Empath and can sense certain things about their charges. That can use that to mold a new life for both.

Or you could research the historical creation of Zombies and use the same methods that have been used in the past.

You mean, the use of drugs, right? You've read The Serpent and the Rainbow?

--Annie

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Or you could research the historical creation of Zombies and use the same methods that have been used in the past.

What little I know involves Voodoo and some unethical means.

 

[Wolfblackthorne]

Since you're already going into an alternate reality of sorts, do it without the drugging. Example, the Caretakers are a form of Empath and can sense certain things about their charges. That can use that to mold a new life for both.

Thank you for the idea. Is the forum the best way to discuss ideas with someone?

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

You mean, the use of drugs, right? You've read The Serpent and the Rainbow?

--Annie

I remember an episode of Miami Vice with Clarence Williams III and one from In The Heat Of The Night with Iman that really creeped me out.

 

[SamanthaBehgs]

You mean, the use of drugs, right? You've read The Serpent and the Rainbow?

--Annie

I do mean drugs - I was giving an alternative to taking things into the more fantastical (technically, athough the use of a law requiring a guardian for all adult men is clearly an alternate reality, it *could* happen) and back into something that is actually medically possible.

And no, I haven't read The Serpent and the Rainbow. I have, however, read Do Zombies Dream of Undead Sheep? A Neuroscientific View of the Zombie Brain that goes into what I assume are similar details.

What little I know involves Voodoo and some unethical means.

I would argue that the use of empathy to manipulate someone is also an unethical means of mind control. We had already crossed the ethics line in my mind, which is where the thought came from. Voodoo is not actually required, however, it can be done regardless of religious beliefs or practices because of the neurochemical effects of the various toxins.


I find myself wondering: Is there ethical mind control if the participant is unwilling?

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

I would argue that the use of empathy to manipulate someone is also an unethical means of mind control.

I'm thinking more of a SciFi version of Empaths. Less threatening than PsyCorps.

Learning about their charges and applying their knowledge.

 

[Wolfblackthorne]

So more like a Mary Poppins? Is that what you are thinking?

 

[SamanthaBehgs]

I'm thinking more of a SciFi version of Empaths. Less threatening than PsyCorps.

Learning about their charges and applying their knowledge.

I'm not sure I can picture a SciFi Empath. I can picture real life empathy and, honestly, some of the most empathic people I've met also have the potential to be some of the most harmful if they so chose by virtue of knowing exactly where the buttons are (or at least, close enough to exact).

In this case, you mentioned they could sense certain things about their charge. What sorts of things are those in a SciFi setting? (Or if you don't feel like telling me, I'd be glad to be pointed in the direction of something to teach myself, preferably a video because, ironically, my ability to read long form content has been curtailed of late).

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

So more like a Mary Poppins? Is that what you are thinking?

That would be a bit too sappy. But from that same time period of entertainment, consider Phoebe Figalily of 'Nanny and The Professor' who seemed to ... just know things.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

I'm not sure I can picture a SciFi Empath.

In this case, you mentioned they could sense certain things about their charge. What sorts of things are those in a SciFi setting?

I mentioned Psi Corps:

https://babylon5.fandom.com/wiki/Psi_Corps


There was indeed some evil involved there, but for a Lit story, there needn't have to be.

 

[Wolfblackthorne]

But isn't Mary Poppins a cosmic entity?

 

[SamanthaBehgs]

I mentioned Psi Corps:

https://babylon5.fandom.com/wiki/Psi_Corps


There was indeed some evil involved there, but for a Lit story, there needn't have to be.

Sorry, I thought you were contrasting Sci Fi empathy to PsiCorp because, clearly, I need to spend a bit more time in that shame corner before posting.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

https://powerlisting.fandom.com/wiki/Empathy


"The user can fully interpret the emotions, moods, and temperaments of others without reading apparent symptoms, allowing them to understand introverts or discover one emotion is actually hiding another. They can attack someone in a personal and emotional way since they know exactly what emotion is flowing through themselves and can use this knowledge to play against them. Some users may learn to read emotional imprints left into environment or objects.

This particular ability is a nuanced extension of Empathy which allow a user to perceive the lingering emotional energy that has been embedded in a place or item due to significant events or the release of strong emotions. For instance, in a room where a tragic event occurred, an empath might feel waves of sadness, fear, or anger that still linger, even if years have passed. Similarly, a location associated with love and celebration might radiate joy and warmth, making the empath feel uplifted.

Through it, an empath could perceive echoes of past events, almost as if the emotions themselves tell a story. This could manifest in visions or sensations that provide clues about what happened. If the users were to touch an object that belonged to someone, they might be able to sense that person’s emotional state during pivotal moments connected to the item, almost experiencing their feelings firsthand. These experiences can help the empath understand people and situations deeply or solve mysteries by uncovering hidden emotional truths."


For a Lit story, an Empath could sense a latent kink or fetish and bring it out in a way that was not destructive.

 

[Wolfblackthorne]

That's interesting. Would it hurt the empath if they felt too many negative things?

 

[SamanthaBehgs]

That's interesting. Would it hurt the empath if they felt too many negative things?

Ooo - if they could, you could totally write a story about a secretly masochistic Dom/Domme

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Combining Empaths and Nanny Figalliy, our Caretaker might simply find a pacifier and diaper in her charge's home .... one that does not have any infants. Her 'powers' are that of deduction and since the Charge has planted his own seed, he should be easy to lead further down that path.

 

[Wolfblackthorne]

Ok. So would it be better if he had a hidden regression fetish instead?

 

[dirk2024]

Thank you for the idea. Is the forum the best way to discuss ideas with someone?

You'd be better off back in the "Story Idea's" thread. But you're here now.