A Swap of a Different Sort

[sirhugs]

Just toying with this idea, trying to see if I can break my writer's block.

Fairly simple idea. A swap, but not a wife swap. And perhaps so incest.

Instead, two single 40something friends realize that they can help each other. Not by having sex together. They discover that they are both attracted to youngish (legal) people of the opposite sex.

So the Mom proposes to send her daughter to stay with the Dad, while the Dad's son will come stay with the Mom "to do a few projects around the house". Primary project to be fucking the Mom of course.

That's all I've got, which is not enough. Need some complications, and sex.

Are the daughter and son secret fuckbuddies?
Is one or both a virgin?
Is one or both gay?
Do both parents succeed in seducing the visitor? Neither? One?
Or do the "kids" figure out what is going on?
If so, what do they do about it? Like, do they fuck each other?
Are there secret kinks?
Once the swap is over, is there incest? Both pairings or just one?
And most difficult right now, what sort of sex scenes can I write that don't seem to me to just be repetitions of stuff I've written lately? Being without sex myself, I rely on memory, and the bank is sort of dry., having written more stories in a brief period of time than usual. I'm afraid it will read as mechanical.

 

[sirhugs]

and of course, is there impregnation? Does the Dad get the gal pregnant, so she and the son get married, and they raise his half-brother as his own child?

 

[Rob_Royale]

I could work with this. The mom Gail, and dad Tom, are friends but there's enough about the other they don't like to keep them from being romantically interested.

So they sit one day at a cafe where his son works and he can see her admiring the young man. "Damn, Tom. Why don't you send junior to my place on Saturday. My gutters need cleaning." She's kinda joking, kinda not.

Bob chuckles but thinks about it. "You think, Janie could help with my garden?"

Gail blinks in surprise but has to wonder. Her daughter has been nursing a broken heart for far too long and Gail knows she's into older guys.

Their eyes meet over the cafe table and they both realize this is something worth considering.

It would be awesome if both couples fall in love. The readers in the Mature category love that.

 

[KindredFlame]

Just toying with this idea, trying to see if I can break my writer's block.

Fairly simple idea. A swap, but not a wife swap. And perhaps so incest.

Instead, two single 40something friends realize that they can help each other. Not by having sex together. They discover that they are both attracted to youngish (legal) people of the opposite sex.

So the Mom proposes to send her daughter to stay with the Dad, while the Dad's son will come stay with the Mom "to do a few projects around the house". Primary project to be fucking the Mom of course.

That's all I've got, which is not enough. Need some complications, and sex.

Are the daughter and son secret fuckbuddies?
Is one or both a virgin?
Is one or both gay?
Do both parents succeed in seducing the visitor? Neither? One?
Or do the "kids" figure out what is going on?
If so, what do they do about it? Like, do they fuck each other?
Are there secret kinks?
Once the swap is over, is there incest? Both pairings or just one?
And most difficult right now, what sort of sex scenes can I write that don't seem to me to just be repetitions of stuff I've written lately? Being without sex myself, I rely on memory, and the bank is sort of dry., having written more stories in a brief period of time than usual. I'm afraid it will read as mechanical.

This is a great idea and could have multiple chapters. I like the idea of the two kids being fuck buddies that then rules out 2and 3 I think the possibility of both being successful are slim but not outside the realms of possibility. Incest is not involved as they are friends not husband and wife

 

[sirhugs]

I could work with this. The mom Gail, and dad Tom, are friends but there's enough about the other they don't like to keep them from being romantically interested.

So they sit one day at a cafe where his son works and he can see her admiring the young man. "Damn, Tom. Why don't you send junior to my place on Saturday. My gutters need cleaning." She's kinda joking, kinda not.

Bob chuckles but thinks about it. "You think, Janie could help with my garden?"

Gail blinks in surprise but has to wonder. Her daughter has been nursing a broken heart for far too long and Gail knows she's into older guys.

Their eyes meet over the cafe table and they both realize this is something worth considering.

It would be awesome if both couples fall in love. The readers in the Mature category love that.

Him. The mature twist was in the back of my mind, but you have shifted it forward.

I'm 600 words in. Have the introduction and draft conclusion done. Now wondering if Bobby Junior and Amy are virgins or not.

 

[sirhugs]

This is a great idea and could have multiple chapters. I like the idea of the two kids being fuck buddies that then rules out 2and 3 I think the possibility of both being successful are slim but not outside the realms of possibility. Incest is not involved as they are friends not husband and wife

So no threesome with a parent and the two kids? I guess that also rules out a threesome with the two parents, or a foursome.

 

[KindredFlame]

That would be a foursome

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

Some basics first, to help me understand the situation.

The friends are a man and a woman.
They both have children, but are they still married or living alone with the children?

If these assumptions are right, then the following ideas pop to my mind.

- Of course the ruse works and the mom has sex with the friend's son and the father with the friends daughter.
- Since Martha and Frank (the single parents) cam up with the idea I would set up the story from their point of view in the sense, of "How does Martha get her daughter to have sex with Frank, and how does she get her to stay with him in the first place? Maybe daughter has a kink, that Frank can fulfil? (Brat, DDLG being one possibility)
- I would enjoy the idea of Martha implicitly encouraging her daughter to cross boundaries with Frank.
- I would enjoy if the kids at some stage found out and play along as they enjoy the sex with Frank and Martha.

Reading some of your recent works, I find your sex scenes fast-paced and playing with having a spectators. ou are also using expository dialogue a lot to advance plot.
So why not challenge yourself to the opposite?
Make the story a slow burner and try to avoid expository dialogue and keep it in an intimate setting.

 

[Carnevil9]

If you are going to make one of them a virgin, make it the son. Devirgining a young lady is too cliched.

I could see a sweet, romantic version where both of the May/December couples live happily ever after. But I could also see a down and dirty version where everything goes.

 

[Duleigh]

The only thing that comes to mind is when Dad goes to make a move on daughter, she's getting the bone from somebody else: mailman, dog catcher, pizza delivery guy.

Meanwhile Mom and son hop into bed at first chance and never slow down.

 

[sirhugs]

The only thing that comes to mind is when Dad goes to make a move on daughter, she's getting the bone from somebody else: mailman, dog catcher, pizza delivery guy.

Meanwhile Mom and son hop into bed at first chance and never slow down.

I like your mind, but she's already almost in the pool wearing her teeniest bikini, floating there thinking about how sexy Senior is for an older man.

 

[KindredFlame]

I had a stab at this earlier.

Alex and his new wife Cari, arrange a family holiday at the posh Elysian Grand hotel with their teenage children by previous relationships, Cari’s daughter Chloe 18 and Alex’s son Liam 19 in an effort to foster family bonding. Unbeknown to Alex and Cari the teens where already intimate having met at school where their voyage of sexual discovery had already begun.

The holiday was indulgent, however, when a "Summer Ball" was looming on the horizon, the family becomes increasingly cryptic regarding their individualised invitations. Each of them had received second, individualised invitation cards that was to separate them with each of them to a different, evocatively named location, like "The Gilded Cage" and "The Serpent's Kiss"all at varying times.

As they prepare for the ball, however, the family comes together and compare their cards. Even though each one is different on the bottom edge all said the same thing. Less Is More, this leads the family into the Elysian Grand congealed world of a darker nature. larger, thrilling mysteries, portending adventures much more erotic and complex than any of them anticipated.

There is an extended version if anyone think it could be worthy.

 

[sirhugs]

I have started my version. Others are welcome to write their own versions. I might also incorporate details from here into my story, if no one objects. It is going to be a longer story - I'm 2000 words in, and have started the sex play, but no actual sex. Usually, I try to give the reader sex within the first 1000 words.

Here's what I can use help with now.

I set up the swap as a week long, but the seduction is already going to lead to some sort of sex for both pairs on day one. Do I have to visit them each day, coming up with fresh variations- for both couples- or can skip days? If I do seven days, or even five days, this is going to be a very long story, at least for me. At the current rate, it might be 15,000 words or so- a bit over four pages in classic Lit format. I have done this long before, but it is a huge commitment.

What do you all think?
What sex acts can I use for variety?

 

[KindredFlame]

I have started my version. Others are welcome to write their own versions. I might also incorporate details from here into my story, if no one objects. It is going to be a longer story - I'm 2000 words in, and have started the sex play, but no actual sex. Usually, I try to give the reader sex within the first 1000 words.

Here's what I can use help with now.

I set up the swap as a week long, but the seduction is already going to lead to some sort of sex for both pairs on day one. Do I have to visit them each day, coming up with fresh variations- for both couples- or can skip days? If I do seven days, or even five days, this is going to be a very long story, at least for me. At the current rate, it might be 15,000 words or so- a bit over four pages in classic Lit format. I have done this long before, but it is a huge commitment.

What do you all think?
What sex acts can I use for variety?

My version takes the group into the world of BDSM or something, not quite sure, at the hotel and each in turn perform for the crowds, the kids volunteer but the adults are reluctant so as the kids show was filmed some persuasion was introduced.

 

[sirhugs]

My version takes the group into the world of BDSM or something, not quite sure, at the hotel and each in turn perform for the crowds, the kids volunteer but the adults are reluctant so as the kids show was filmed some persuasion was introduced.

That would be a very different story from mine.

 

[KindredFlame]

That would be a very different story from mine.

Yes it would.

 

[Carnevil9]

I have started my version. Others are welcome to write their own versions. I might also incorporate details from here into my story, if no one objects. It is going to be a longer story - I'm 2000 words in, and have started the sex play, but no actual sex. Usually, I try to give the reader sex within the first 1000 words.

Here's what I can use help with now.

I set up the swap as a week long, but the seduction is already going to lead to some sort of sex for both pairs on day one. Do I have to visit them each day, coming up with fresh variations- for both couples- or can skip days? If I do seven days, or even five days, this is going to be a very long story, at least for me. At the current rate, it might be 15,000 words or so- a bit over four pages in classic Lit format. I have done this long before, but it is a huge commitment.

What do you all think?
What sex acts can I use for variety?

Dear Lord, don't do seven separate days unless something really new and really interesting happens on each of those days. And in that case, it should probably be seven standalone chapters.

As my old pappy used to say to me: Son, seven days of fucking makes one hole weak.

 

[sirhugs]

Dear Lord, don't do seven separate days unless something really new and really interesting happens on each of those days. And in that case, it should probably be seven standalone chapters.

As my old pappy used to say to me: Son, seven days of fucking makes one hole weak.

good thing there is more than one hole...

 

[KindredFlame]

I learnt how to use all three on the day I was 18 strange that.

 

[sirhugs]

Dear Lord, don't do seven separate days unless something really new and really interesting happens on each of those days. And in that case, it should probably be seven standalone chapters.

As my old pappy used to say to me: Son, seven days of fucking makes one hole weak.

I might cut the week short.
Maybe Bobby Junior should fall off a ladder at Alice's, break his leg and go home early? Alice has to drive him of course. So they arrive to find Robert Senior and Amy in flagrante delicto. I know what twist would happen next.

 

[sirhugs]

Wanna play Clue?

Robert owns a mansion. he is hosting young Amy, daughter of his friend with benefits Alice. Yesterday he titfucked Amy in pool because she said she would only fuck him out of the water.

What room in the mansion does he take her to to make love today?

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

Wanna play Clue?

Robert owns a mansion. he is hosting young Amy, daughter of his friend with benefits Alice. Yesterday he titfucked Amy in pool because she said she would only fuck him out of the water.

What room in the mansion does he take her to to make love today?

Tell her three rooms. Perhaps the bedroom, the library and the greenhouse in the garden.

She's getting fucked in each room. Her mouth in the morning, her pussy in the afternoon and lastly her asshole in the evening.

But she can choose which room each action happens in.

 

[sirhugs]

Thinking this sprawling novella better not cover the full week lest it rival War and Peace. will cogitate on the incident that causes them to call it quits before the original plan.
Any ideas?

 

[KindredFlame]

Thinking this sprawling novella better not cover the full week lest it rival War and Peace. will cogitate on the incident that causes them to call it quits before the original plan.
Any ideas?

The art of war is a better read, I am told.

 

[KindredFlame]

The young blond walks into the dining room she sees there is only one candlestick so as these come in pairs she uses the one still there to pleasures herself under the table while all the killing is going on. The brass feels so good in her hot…..