Some doubt's regarding stories(incest)

[EmperorN3R0]

I'm thinking of writing incest taboo stories & have some doubt's about that .

1) regression/ reincarnation/ possession . like regressing into 20y/o or some other person. I can't see any story like this when searching. is there any rule not to write with that?

2)I'm thinking of writing about a already existing superhero story like bat-man and his mother survived and now 21y/o bat-man..type of story.I will change the names but is there anything I should change and careful about

3) is about from a perspective of monster like slime. I've read the rules but is there anything extra I should know about.

And does stories can only be in 1 category ? Cause the 3rd slime story I'm thinking of writing it as mom son incest. But it should be in nonhuman category or can it be put in incest category?

 

[TheLobster]

Stories can only be put in one category. Most categories have largely non overlapping audiences, Incest in particular, which is often said to be a "trump" one that overrides others.

In other words, if you have incest themes, your story should almost certainly go in Incest/Taboo.

 

[EmperorN3R0]

Stories can only be put in one category. Most categories have largely non overlapping audiences, Incest in particular, which is often said to be a "trump" one that overrides others.

In other words, if you have incest themes, your story should almost certainly go in Incest/Taboo.

Thanks , I understand now

 

[alohadave]

1) regression/ reincarnation/ possession . like regressing into 20y/o or some other person. I can't see any story like this when searching. is there any rule not to write with that?

These are called Do-overs. Either the MC goes back in time to a younger age and retains their current knowledge, or the character de-ages while remaining in the same time frame.

3) is about from a perspective of monster like slime. I've read the rules but is there anything extra I should know about.

There are some slime monster stories. Put it in non-human or erotic horror depending on the tone.

And does stories can only be in 1 category ? Cause the 3rd slime story I'm thinking of writing it as mom son incest. But it should be in nonhuman category or can it be put in incest category?

Incest will likely trump the non-human. You can put an Admit Note when you submit asking for one or the other, but Laurel will make the final decision about which category.

I have an MC story and an anal story that we're both put in Incest because they are all family. Incest trumped the other themes.

 

[EmperorN3R0]

These are called Do-overs. Either the MC goes back in time to a younger age and retains their current knowledge, or the character de-ages while remaining in the same time frame.


There are some slime monster stories. Put it in non-human or erotic horror depending on the tone.



Incest will likely trump the non-human. You can put an Admit Note when you submit asking for one or the other, but Laurel will make the final decision about which category.

I have an MC story and an anal story that we're both put in Incest because they are all family. Incest trumped the other themes.

Does the do over incest story actually exist?

 

[alohadave]

Does the do over incest story actually exist?

It does. There aren't many Do-over stories here, but I've read them on other sites.

 

[ElectricBlue]

Stories can only be put in one category. Most categories have largely non overlapping audiences, Incest in particular, which is often said to be a "trump" one that overrides others.

In other words, if you have incest themes, your story should almost certainly go in Incest/Taboo.

It's not an automatic default though. I have two stories with incest sub-themes, where I asked Laurel to place them in my preferred categories. She did so, just put an Editor's Note at the top, "This story contains incest themes."

 

[EmperorN3R0]

It's not an automatic default though. I have two stories with incest sub-themes, where I asked Laurel to place them in my preferred categories. She did so, just put an Editor's Note at the top, "This story contains incest themes."

Ok

 

[EmperorN3R0]

It does. There aren't many Do-over stories here, but I've read them on other sites.

Can you tell me where? I could not find any

 

[SimonDoom]

Can you tell me where? I could not find any

Google Doing It All Over by Al Steiner. I read it many years ago. It doesn't have incest, if I recall correctly, but it DOES have content that wouldn't be allowed here.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Google Doing It All Over by Al Steiner. I read it many years ago. It doesn't have incest, if I recall correctly, but it DOES have content that wouldn't be allowed here.

This is it.

https://www.rulit.me/books/doing-it-all-over-read-233200-1.html

It wouldn't be accepted here because the narrator goes back to the age of fifteen. There is another erotic literature site that allows characters in sexual situations as young as fourteen. I've used it at times because sometimes I want to do a coming-of-age story that requires that.

 

[JGittes]

Fetish is another category with incest tolerance. A warning at the top of the story may suffice.

 

[EmperorN3R0]

My story got sent back. This time I have put line breaks for everyline thinking I won't get any errors and get sent back. But My story got sent back with this

"Status
Sent back
Important Message About Your Submission
Dear Writer,

Thank you for your submission to Literotica. We appreciate the time and effort you've taken to write a story and submit it to our site . However, we've found that we cannot post your submission in its current form. The checklist below may help you in re-examining your manuscript.

Please fix the formatting of your dialogue. The essay "How to Make Characters Talk" in our Writer's Resources section has more information on the formatting of dialogue if you have further questions: https://www.literotica.com/s/how-to-make-characters-talk
Please feel free to re-submit the story after a Volunteer Editor has examined it, or after you've made revisions. You can find a list of Volunteer Editors here.

Please consult our Writer's Resources section and make sure you read our submission guidelines.
If you have any questions on these, please let us know.

Thanks for your time, and look forward to reading you again"

then i got a doubt is it because of the line breaks or how i wrote. ⬇⬇⬇ below is a scene from my story. Is it the line breaks or the way I wrote if anyone know kindly tell what to change

"
One night, a guy named Mark DMs me, praising my "pecs" and "arms."

Our chat turns sexual, he seems like he's gay because he was constantly asking for my dick pics with every message.

I'm not gay, but I did end up sending them.

"Have you ever done anything wild?" he asks.

"Nope, I'm a virgin," I admitted, "mostly into girls." I said that so he doesn't send dick pics.

The next day, the chat dives into taboo talk and he sends a nude photo of a woman, then flooding with the chat with that womans pics, atleast 50 pics, big boobs and ass and He kept sending me pics then he sent pics of him fucking her.

My dick got hard instantly.

"Who's that?" I typed.

"That's my mom," he replied.

"Oh, okay," is what i said, but I think it must be some AI. I've seen plenty of pics like that on the internet and plenty of stories like that on the forum.

He spills how he seduced her with late-night talks and stolen touches.

Though this guy is lying, he's lying very well, his story with the picture got me very hard.
"
Thanks.

 

[TheLobster]

⬇⬇⬇ below is a scene from my story. Is it the line breaks or the way I wrote if anyone know kindly tell what to change

Interesting. It might be because your 'dialogue' isn't actually a dialogue but a transcript of chat messages, so you need to go with different kind of punctuation or formatting.

You may want to peruse the recent tutorial by @FrancesScott for options. Personally I prefer <kbd> for text messages so they look like typed text, but I've seen <em> (italics) or even no formatting at all.

 

[MrPixel]

It might be because your 'dialogue' isn't actually a dialogue but a transcript of chat messages,

Can't be it. I treat a text exchange as the conversation it is, sometimes including the occasional "LOL," "BRB," or "CUL."

Conversational punctuation is correct, too, so at least from the example I can't see anything wrong.

 

[TheLobster]

Can't be it. I treat a text exchange as the conversation it is, sometimes including the occasional "LOL," "BRB," or "CUL."

Conversational punctuation is correct, too, so at least from the example I can't see anything wrong.

If that's the case, then I don't see anything wrong either. Only minute issue that's somewhat related to punctuation is you don't need quotes around pecs and arms, but I would shocked if he got dinged for that. There's also minor tense confusion here and there, but that's not what the rejection was about.

@EmperorN3R0 your problem most likely lies elsewhere. Perhaps it's in some other scene, where the characters are actually speaking?

 

[MrPixel]

...don't need quotes around pecs and arms, ...

That's debatable. It's quoting the other person's references to his physical features, which he may consider exaggerations of the "you gotta be kidding" nature. Stet, as far as I'm concerned.

 

[NuclearFairy]

Only thing I can think of is that because it's not actually dialog and it's only one word, the period should be outside the quotation marks in the first line.

 

[PapaRomantic]

In the case of 'pecs' and 'arms,' I would use a single apostrophe like I've done here so that the reader knows clearly it's not conversation.

But I agree it should not have been sent back to you just for this issue.

 

[MrPixel]

...it's only one word, the period should be outside the quotation marks in the first line.

Even the style guides don't agree with each other on this. I also used this "exception" for many, many years, and recently relented to consistency with The Chicago Manual of Style, which says punctuation inside the double quotes.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

"This is something spoken, some dialog."

This is 'something' emphasized, or highlighted as an 'example'.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

But I'm sure the double green EE-nie will be along soon to put us all in our places.

 

[NuclearFairy]

Even the style guides don't agree with each other on this. I also used this "exception" for many, many years, and recently relented to consistency with The Chicago Manual of Style, which says punctuation inside the double quotes.

Now if only we could get all the guides to be consistent with each other.

 

[TheLobster]

Now if only we could get all the guides to be consistent with each other.

It's a surefire sign there aren't enough guides yet!

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Now if only we could get all the guides to be consistent with each other.

We need a written guide as to how writing guides should be written.