That is what is what I enjoy. It is what someone feels and puts it down. I don't look at the grammar as the story is what gets my mind in that spot. Then take it from there which is then to jerk offyou know just to put a smile on my faceThankyou for your wind words!!! I know itās not the best writing, editing still has to be done but the premise is certainly there! So so glad you enjoyed!
You are wonderful
thankyou so much darling! I donāt do it just for the boys so when a woman pops up here it makes my day! 
Oh yes, 5,000 is not too much for most at all, by the way! I have read 30k words, oh goodness, wouldn't do it again, but I have! lolYou are wonderful
I might have a little look! I honestly wasnāt sure anyone would want to spend time editing my silly stories, but if thereās someone out there willing to, it would really help me. Editing is the bane of my life. Iāll write a solid 5,000 words, then remember I have to go back and re-draft, edit, scrap parts, read it again, take a break from it, return later, realise I hate it, and then edit all over again. It can be a real pain!
Iām hoping to self publish a book of short stories for the ābedroomā at the end of the year! So something like this could come in very handy!
Serious question I have... So when editing something like that of an erotic story, I am sure you need to take some breaks from getting aroused reading them? AFAFOh yes, 5,000 is not too much for most at all, by the way! I have read 30k words, oh goodness, wouldn't do it again, but I have! lol
Feel free to take a look at the editors and if you don't find anyone, your excerpt is wonderful, I would be willing to help
Underboob's the best though!
Where's this editors section?
"Edit profile" "Editors"
That was totally amazing. You need a nice mouth all over that hot body!
If you're talking about the link I think you're talking about, it looks like it was removed by the host site. Lit mods would just remove the link from the post, so unless your troll is going so far as reporting all of your uploads to the hosts, I think you're dealing with an auto delete bot.Nope. No rules broken. Both ladies were consenting adultsā¦ they knew where the pic was going.
Youāve seen minimal content from me because I only set up this thread at the end of Feb, this year, and took a long break from the 8th of March all the way through till mid may, so thereās not been much going on!
The video was actually posted yesterday, it was up for maybe 6 hours. No oneās face was in it bar mine!
But yeah, Iām not about to risk losing my thread just because someone out there canāt handle me enjoying myself. Not gonna let one miserable person ruin the fun for everyone else.
Oh. Oh, fuck.
Thanks!!
Yep, after editing 30k words I think Iād have to take a long lie down, have a huge glass of red and whisper ānever againā, silently into the voidOh yes, 5,000 is not too much for most at all, by the way! I have read 30k words, oh goodness, wouldn't do it again, but I have! lol
Feel free to take a look at the editors and if you don't find anyone, your excerpt is wonderful, I would be willing to help
What was the 30k-er, by the way? Iām hoping it was worth the eyeball strain and screen headaches!! it evens out the m/f ratio
Oh the 30k read was well worth it. Iāve thrown in the towel if itās too bad before!Yep, after editing 30k words I think Iād have to take a long lie down, have a huge glass of red and whisper ānever againā, silently into the void
And thank you! Iāll have a little nose through the editors thread on Lit, however knowing I may have your brain on standby is chefs kiss! Iāll send you a dm in the week! And always feel free to pop in here!!! Like whenever
Nothing worse than reading garbage. I can imagine youāve read some interesting stories though!Oh the 30k read was well worth it. Iāve thrown in the towel if itās too bad before!
I missed it but guarantee it was worth the wait!Hope it was worth the wait
Final Submission
Given some time and space, Iāll attempt all of themā¦.Right, Iām tired and will be heading to sleep soon buttt thought Iād leave this here for you lot to have some fun with. Iāve put together a list of dirty, curious, and maybe slightly unhinged questions and scenarios. Feel free to answer one, some, or go wild and tackle the whole list. This isnāt one for the lurkers, I want entertaining answers!
- Whatās the dirtiest thought youāve had today? Be honest.
- Is there a sex act you fantasise about constantly but have never tried?
- Do you prefer to take control or be more submissive? (My answer: Iām a switch, more dominant with women, submissive with men, but can also swap roles depending on the person/dynamic).
- Whatās your favourite kind of teasing: physical, mental, or verbal?
- Ever orgasmed from just words/texts/voice without being touched?
- Youāve been given a dare to send a nude to someone you shouldnāt. Who do you choose, and what do you send? (My answer: My exās best friend. Iād send a picture of my best friend and I bent over in the mirror in lingerieā¦ the best friend that he cheated on me with.)
- Youāre on vacation. You see a hot stranger masturbating in a private cabana. Do you make make a move? Or do you watch from afar?
- Whatās a kink youāve changed your mind about? Something you used to judge or fear, but now youāre into? ( My answer: Cnc, with the right person, again itās all down to dynamic. Iāve had contract style dom/sub relationships in the past. Very fun when done right.)
- Ever had an orgasm in a place you absolutely shouldnāt have? Tell me everything. ( my answer: at a dinner party with family and friends, I was sitting across from my partner and I was wearing my vibe. There was something so freaking hot about the fact no one else knew. We kept sneaking off to help ādo the dishesā and āclear upā so that we could make out. He came in a matter of seconds once I got my hands on him at the end. )
10. Would you rather be:
A) Used as my personal sex toy
B) Forbidden to touch yourself without permission
C) Edged to a ruined orgasm.
B) Locked in chastity while you serve me in other ways.!
Have fun, I wanna see some good responses
I just got home from errands and after reading your story excerpt, seeing the picture after and seeing the under boob picture, I went back and started stroking with your earlier video. Once I finish this list, I am going to finish what you inspired imagining that I cum in the place you want.
I have never had a decent, full blowjob. Nor have I received a double to be honest.
I have a tendency to take control, but I am more submissive in non-sexual situations where I try to make people happy if that makes sense.
All the above, really. My preference is verbal, mental, then physical.
I have.
definitely to a former cyber-buddy who I haven't spoken to in years. I would send a picture of a hot girl (maybe a @SpicyBean99 like person) taking my cock down her throat to show how nasty I could be.
I would watch initially. If there's signs of needing participation, I would join.
Choking. I used to see it as too aggressive, but after being with certain partners and knowing how to control it, I love it.
I had sex with an ex behind a church. She simply pulled my cock out, had me lay on the ground and rode me til I filled her up. This was on a military base and thankfully we never got caught. She also spent time with me in the barracks also one day, but behind the church was hotter.
Definitely A. The other three are not as appealing .
10. Would you rather be:
A) Used as my personal sex toy
B) Forbidden to touch yourself without permission
C) Edged to a ruined orgasm.
B) Locked in chastity while you serve me in other ways.!
I about to finish what you inspired.Thankyouuuuu Azul
There is a double B.
