Devinter
The Dreamweaver
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Alright - so I wrote a story a while back (not uploaded) that I think has some potential but I wasn't entirely sure where to go with it after the initial premise, so I am coming here to the forums asking for some creative suggestions.
The premise is this; It's late at night. A woman living alone in a flat hears a loud thud, or crash, and to her great surprise she finds a man lying on her balcony - despite living in a tall building, ten stories or so up, on the top floor - and there's no way this man could've really gotten there any other way than falling out of the sky. He appears to be unconscious at first, and he's unnaturally beautiful, wearing extravagant clothes. Obviously, the woman freaks out, but as she's in the process of calling for an ambulance - not knowing what else to do - the man gets up and approaches her. He appears to be completely unharmed.
He doesn't seem to speak. And he doesn't really seem to understand her words either. But his eyes says it all. He comes across as kind, warm, and full of desire. After some back and forth and debating over what to do, the woman eventually cannot resist the subtle advances of this man (mostly him just appearing very non-threatening, wanting to be close to her, undressing her with his eyes - he doesn't touch her without her permission) and so she ends up in bed with him - and they have intense, passionate sex. He seems to know exactly what she likes, how she wishes to be touched, when to go faster and when to go slower. All of her kinks are taken care of. But there's also an emotional connection she cannot explain.
They fall asleep together, but in the morning, he's gone. Now, I could end the story there, without any explanations given, but it feels a little cheap. Plus, I think this story needs a happy ending somehow. In the rough draft, she's torn up about the man being gone, and stresses out over it - feeling a little heartbroken, despite getting attached to him so quickly, without their encounter making a lot of sense. And then night comes she hears another loud thud/crash from the balcony, implying he might have returned, and the story ends right there.
Honestly, it's kind of a 'stroker' but I still want the story element to feel satisfying to the reader. Any suggestions would be warmly welcomed. Thank you in advance!
The premise is this; It's late at night. A woman living alone in a flat hears a loud thud, or crash, and to her great surprise she finds a man lying on her balcony - despite living in a tall building, ten stories or so up, on the top floor - and there's no way this man could've really gotten there any other way than falling out of the sky. He appears to be unconscious at first, and he's unnaturally beautiful, wearing extravagant clothes. Obviously, the woman freaks out, but as she's in the process of calling for an ambulance - not knowing what else to do - the man gets up and approaches her. He appears to be completely unharmed.
He doesn't seem to speak. And he doesn't really seem to understand her words either. But his eyes says it all. He comes across as kind, warm, and full of desire. After some back and forth and debating over what to do, the woman eventually cannot resist the subtle advances of this man (mostly him just appearing very non-threatening, wanting to be close to her, undressing her with his eyes - he doesn't touch her without her permission) and so she ends up in bed with him - and they have intense, passionate sex. He seems to know exactly what she likes, how she wishes to be touched, when to go faster and when to go slower. All of her kinks are taken care of. But there's also an emotional connection she cannot explain.
They fall asleep together, but in the morning, he's gone. Now, I could end the story there, without any explanations given, but it feels a little cheap. Plus, I think this story needs a happy ending somehow. In the rough draft, she's torn up about the man being gone, and stresses out over it - feeling a little heartbroken, despite getting attached to him so quickly, without their encounter making a lot of sense. And then night comes she hears another loud thud/crash from the balcony, implying he might have returned, and the story ends right there.
Honestly, it's kind of a 'stroker' but I still want the story element to feel satisfying to the reader. Any suggestions would be warmly welcomed. Thank you in advance!