Student's Pet

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I've written two stories thus far ("Student's Pet", and "Babysitter...and more") both in erotic couplings. Just wondering if anyone had any feedback. Are those stories worth continuing? Any suggestion for other story ideas?
 
Chris,

Good to chat with you yesterday. I did read your stories. I thought they were well set up, and you made a good attempt at creating back story and plausible motivations, for the men, anyway, the women did jump into the action very quickly, without any strong reason, so you could work on that if you like. But, they were short, fine diversions. Keep writing.

Dixon Carter Lee
 
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