Short True Stories - any feedback would be great.

mranon90

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Hi there.
Thanks for clicking.
I’m trying to write some short, fun memories from things I’ve done in my life. Before I forget them now I’m getting on 😂.

Before I do too many I’d love feedback on the first couple if anyone would like to have a read. Give me any pointers if there’s anything you think spoils them or if I don’t get them across in a way that’s exciting to the reader.

Thanks so much in advance.

https://literotica.com/s/short-confession-02-watch-me-wank

https://literotica.com/s/short-confession-03-work-wife
 
My "lesson one" from posting my first story here back in 2002, which got rightly panned, is: NEVER say, 'This is a true story'.

It has the opposite effect from what you think -- it makes the reader suspect you're a big fibber.
 
My "lesson one" from posting my first story here back in 2002, which got rightly panned, is: NEVER say, 'This is a true story'.

It has the opposite effect from what you think -- it makes the reader suspect you're a big fibber.
Readers can't tell the difference, frankly. They'll tell you that couldn't happen when it did, and thank you for sharing a part of your life when it's fiction.

In any event, @mranon90, it's against Lit policy to declare a story is "true" - you might want to change your thread title.
 
Hi there.
Thanks for clicking.
I’m trying to write some short, fun memories from things I’ve done in my life. Before I forget them now I’m getting on 😂.

Before I do too many I’d love feedback on the first couple if anyone would like to have a read. Give me any pointers if there’s anything you think spoils them or if I don’t get them across in a way that’s exciting to the reader.

Thanks so much in advance.

https://literotica.com/s/short-confession-02-watch-me-wank

https://literotica.com/s/short-confession-03-work-wife
Be more confident - I read the work wife story and thought it didn't need the apologetic 'I'm just an average guy' intro. It's a good, sexy set up and a great story.
 
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