Priscilla_June
Naughty Worldbuilder
- Joined
- Apr 7, 2022
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Hello,
I’m making it a point to seek critical feedback on stories I post, my most latest is a pregnancy related one involving some exhibitionism and infidelity. Would love to hear about the following:
https://literotica.com/s/maternity-hall-pass
Thanks!
I’m making it a point to seek critical feedback on stories I post, my most latest is a pregnancy related one involving some exhibitionism and infidelity. Would love to hear about the following:
- Character depth
- Character development
- General world-building (there isnt as much of that in this one but its good to improve)
- Story flow
- Implementation of main themes associated with the story
- Any other areas I may need to improve on.
https://literotica.com/s/maternity-hall-pass
Thanks!