PhoenixLord
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For about a year or so, I've had an idea to write a story for Nude Day, surrounding a golf course. One idea I've had was to make it an illustrated work but I have no artistic talent nor do I know anyone who can make 3d images, so I'm wondering if it works purely as a written story.
The premise: A group of guys live in an apartment and are low on cash, and one of them learns that there's a golfing competition at a local Country Club, on July 14th. All four guys are avid golfers so they organize a team, but on the day of the event, two of the guys can't make it because they have shifts at work at the last minute, so the two remaining are stuck because the competition requires teams of four. Purely by coincidence, two girls are in the same situation and they join teams, only for the guys to realize that they need to sign a waiver and strip naked for the entire game.
Part of the rules of the competition are that each team consents to be recorded by camera crews and the two "hosts" are Pornstars pretending to be Tiger Woods and Paige Spiranac (For a XXX Porn parody). The guys and girls introduce each other and the guys quickly realize that the two girls look similar to pornstars (Fake ones for the story), but they set those thoughts aside and focus on the game to keep their cocks from erecting. Around the fourth hole, they spot a team ahead of them, a group of four fit guys, engaged in paired blowjobs and realize that the camera crew is shooting porn scenes. It's then that the girls reveal that they are, in fact, pornstars and that the entire event was an excuse to do a massive crossover of genres with gay, straight, lesbian, and bisexual films for Nude Day, booking the golf course well in advance. The guys reveal that they learned about the event through the grapevine and thought it was a real competition.
The girls reveal that there is a prize but it's for the raunchiest golf-related sex scene that can be done on the course. They point out that their team was originally going to be one of three lesbian teams but their teammates got sued and had to appear in court (Or some other shit that made them quit the contest), and needed to find a pair willing to join them. The guys are equal parts thrilled and terrified since they're not pornstars but have had fantasies of fucking pornstars, so they agree, and one thing leads to another and they end up winning second place by having a foursome on the eighth hole after scoring four holes in one. In the epilogue, the two guys move out of the apartment and into a shared space with the girls, who encourage them to live the nudist lifestyle, and eventually, they try bi-sex and become a foursome.
So, does this story premise hold up as a completely written work or is it doomed because I can't illustrate it?
The premise: A group of guys live in an apartment and are low on cash, and one of them learns that there's a golfing competition at a local Country Club, on July 14th. All four guys are avid golfers so they organize a team, but on the day of the event, two of the guys can't make it because they have shifts at work at the last minute, so the two remaining are stuck because the competition requires teams of four. Purely by coincidence, two girls are in the same situation and they join teams, only for the guys to realize that they need to sign a waiver and strip naked for the entire game.
Part of the rules of the competition are that each team consents to be recorded by camera crews and the two "hosts" are Pornstars pretending to be Tiger Woods and Paige Spiranac (For a XXX Porn parody). The guys and girls introduce each other and the guys quickly realize that the two girls look similar to pornstars (Fake ones for the story), but they set those thoughts aside and focus on the game to keep their cocks from erecting. Around the fourth hole, they spot a team ahead of them, a group of four fit guys, engaged in paired blowjobs and realize that the camera crew is shooting porn scenes. It's then that the girls reveal that they are, in fact, pornstars and that the entire event was an excuse to do a massive crossover of genres with gay, straight, lesbian, and bisexual films for Nude Day, booking the golf course well in advance. The guys reveal that they learned about the event through the grapevine and thought it was a real competition.
The girls reveal that there is a prize but it's for the raunchiest golf-related sex scene that can be done on the course. They point out that their team was originally going to be one of three lesbian teams but their teammates got sued and had to appear in court (Or some other shit that made them quit the contest), and needed to find a pair willing to join them. The guys are equal parts thrilled and terrified since they're not pornstars but have had fantasies of fucking pornstars, so they agree, and one thing leads to another and they end up winning second place by having a foursome on the eighth hole after scoring four holes in one. In the epilogue, the two guys move out of the apartment and into a shared space with the girls, who encourage them to live the nudist lifestyle, and eventually, they try bi-sex and become a foursome.
So, does this story premise hold up as a completely written work or is it doomed because I can't illustrate it?
