Nicola

[Southernhelle]

This was, by far, the most amazing story I have read on literotica. Duff, I want to be your slave! Seriously, though, I had read the Jackson Family chronicles (also by him/her) and thought they were pretty good, but this story...

[This message has been edited by southernhelle (edited 09-06-1999).]

 

[Guest]

Thank you very much for posting your review on the Board ! And yes, of course you can
be my slave *L*...I just hope that my revised ending which has already been submitted
will not ruin the story. I had received a number of emails complaining about the
unresolved ending, and although I heroically resisted for some time, I accepted a
proposed ending by a reader, polished it up a bit, and I have re-submitted "Nicola"...I
hope I have done the right thing *gulp*.