New to this, yes another one.

[Marriednude]

Hi editors. I’m looking for some feedback on the stories I’ve published. Admittedly the first one was the worst of the lot. But I think the second two are better. I feel more comfortable and am more interested with feedback from women to get their perspective of how I depicted the female characters.

Men are welcome too but I’d like to hear from experienced (over 50) and experienced ( professional writers or editors) men only.

Thank you in advance.

 

[Helgamite]

Hi editors. I’m looking for some feedback on the stories I’ve published. Admittedly the first one was the worst of the lot. But I think the second two are better. I feel more comfortable and am more interested with feedback from women to get their perspective of how I depicted the female characters.

Men are welcome too but I’d like to hear from experienced (over 50) and experienced ( professional writers or editors) men only.

Thank you in advance.

do you have a link so they can get to the stories you want feedback on?

 

[Marriednude]

Can you see them in my profile?

 

[Helgamite]

not on the forum profile. your stories are on the Lit side. if you look at the bottom of my response you'll see a blue link. which goes to my Lit profile. not the forum profile.

right now there is no way I can see your stories thru the Forum.

 

[Helgamite]

Can you see them in my profile?

is this your Lit profile?

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=7588041&page=bio

 

[Marriednude]

is this your Lit profile?

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=7588041&page=bio

Yes

 

[Helgamite]

ok, that gives people access to your stories from the Forum. so people will be able to read your stories.

 

[Marriednude]

Thank you that is very kind of you

 

[Helgamite]

your welcome. glad I could help!

 

[Helgamite]

also if you edit your profile. you'll see a signature. there you can put in a link to your Lit profile, use the link I posted for you as your signature. its a permanent link for people to access your stories.

like i have mine.

 

[Marriednude]

I think I did it

 

[Helgamite]

yep, i can see it now. It will help

 

[Marriednude]

Very kind of you

 

[LucieLou007]

I enjoy a good read, so will have a look at yours. I write although i never claim to be the best

 

[Marriednude]

I enjoy a good read, so will have a look at yours. I write although i never claim to be the best

Thank you Lucy I appreciate you taking the time to read my stories.

 

[Marriednude]

Still looking for some feedback, would love to hear from you all