Beta_Krogoth
High Commander
- Joined
- Feb 22, 2022
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- 13
Hey all, i'm looking to get some feedback on a couple stories and generally get a bit more involved with the community, i'm focusing on my creative output a lot more recently and i'm actually getting a decent amount written. I'm getting some views and favourites on these so far but no real comments.
The first is a series i'm writing called "Sweet Venom", the main porn hook is sci-fi futa on male, alien and anthro characters but the story itself is a mix of action, horror and romance. A bit out there but if you like it, you like it. I'm focusing a lot more on the story though, this isn't technically the original SV i wrote, the original was a lot more porny but its old and needed redoing. I seem to be retaining some views between the chapters but if anyone is bored, i'd love some feedback. Theres a good chunk more story for me up to upload and its on-going but its coming along nicely. - I should note, chapter 1 of SV no longer has any sex in it, if you're looking for the hot stuff, Chapters 2 & 4 are where it happens.
The second is a stand-alone short story based in the same universe, its a futa on female sci-fi first person domination tale with some size difference, lesbian action, strapon and big penetration but it was also my first time doing a first person story, I seem to get a lot of "this is good" but not much else, appreciate any and all feedback.
Links below to both, feel free to read either or neither, thanks for reading and hope you're all doing well!
Sweet Venom Ch.01 - https://literotica.com/s/sweet-venom-ch-01
Sweet Venom Ch.02 - https://literotica.com/s/sweet-venom-ch-02
Expense Taste - https://literotica.com/s/heavy-weapons-expensive-taste
The first is a series i'm writing called "Sweet Venom", the main porn hook is sci-fi futa on male, alien and anthro characters but the story itself is a mix of action, horror and romance. A bit out there but if you like it, you like it. I'm focusing a lot more on the story though, this isn't technically the original SV i wrote, the original was a lot more porny but its old and needed redoing. I seem to be retaining some views between the chapters but if anyone is bored, i'd love some feedback. Theres a good chunk more story for me up to upload and its on-going but its coming along nicely. - I should note, chapter 1 of SV no longer has any sex in it, if you're looking for the hot stuff, Chapters 2 & 4 are where it happens.
The second is a stand-alone short story based in the same universe, its a futa on female sci-fi first person domination tale with some size difference, lesbian action, strapon and big penetration but it was also my first time doing a first person story, I seem to get a lot of "this is good" but not much else, appreciate any and all feedback.
Links below to both, feel free to read either or neither, thanks for reading and hope you're all doing well!
Sweet Venom Ch.01 - https://literotica.com/s/sweet-venom-ch-01
Sweet Venom Ch.02 - https://literotica.com/s/sweet-venom-ch-02
Expense Taste - https://literotica.com/s/heavy-weapons-expensive-taste
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