I'm looking for someone to write a story.....

umbrosilk

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Hello,

I would love someone to write a story along the lines of a concept I have drafted below. Any help most welcome and I appreciate from the offset, this is a bit of a tall ask!!!



The concept:
Background:
It’s 1981 and schools, as well as at home are a lot stricter with corporal punishment regularly carried out and uniformed inspects sometimes carried out, even for the girls, knicker inspections!
Over the knee spanking, and the cane are regular giving out by the teachers, and over the knee is preferred as it’s more embarrassing or even the ‘diaper position’ much favoured by the sports teacher. Girls could not be punished bare however and always had to have a pair of knickers, pats or shorts on at all times. What they were wearing always had to be described in great detail.
Girls, even sometimes in 6th form, have to wear regulation school approve knickers, always cotton, and either navy blue or white in colour. Mothers across the land liked this policy, and approved of it, but some girls were more rebellious than others, and were more intrigued by fabrics such as lace, nylon, silk or satin
Rules: All corporal punishment, caning or spanking, however must always, be carried out over underwear/shorts/pants, and the underwear or shorts, must be described in great detail, while the punishment is carried out. Knickers and shorts, should always be describe in great details, such as the fabric, look, type and colour.
Football Kits in the 80s
Also, what added to the confusion was the national game of football (soccer) as the football kits were coming away from heavy cotton, over to newer lightweight fabrics, such as nylon and polyester. This was the time when football/soccer shorts were made by brands such as Le Coq Sportif, Hummel, Umbro, Puma, Adidas and the soccer shorts were of a silky, shiny, smooth 100% nylon satin shorts material, almost a lingerie type fabric. Football is popular and so it seems the football shorts with certain people!
The girls however must wear navy blue skirt over navy blue regulation cotton knickers.
Story:
The New PE Kit:

It’s Friday morning – and what a surprise today is going to be, for everyone!
Today, Miss William’s introduces a new PE kit to the girls, to wear for PE and sports. The new 80s PE kit consists of, one red soccer top and two pair of shorts and white socks.
The shorts are SATIN!!! The very same one’s used in soccer, they are glossy, very shiny satin, silky nylon material. One is a pair of the very popular Umbro ‘classic’ nylon shorts, in a very silky satin navy blue, the other pair, is in brilliant white made by Adidas, with a green trim, like the Umbro, very shiny satin, and so soft, WOW, WOW, WOW!

In fact, in the changing room, were pairs and pairs of nylon shorts, in different colours, sizes, and styles. Now, some girls up to this pint had never worn satin before and only basic cotton underwear their Mothers had brought them,
And the kit, though approved was much to the chagrin to the other teachers and parent no doubt, when they find out., How did she get those short shorts past everyone, and what will the girls think and the for that matter, their parents when they get to know about their new daughter's shorts???
The girls still had to wear knickers underneath their shorts, with no exceptions!!!
Characters:
Ms Williams,
Sports teacher, and head of 6th form, who seems to relish giving spankings out at any opportunity. She is very beautiful, and how she did it, is a bit of a mystery to the girls, as she doesn't seem much older then them and she's allowed to put them over her knee.
Amy – A bit of a bossy In the 6th form, thinks she is far too old for knicker inspection and a smacked bottom, very arrogant and deep down has a bit of a satin fetish. Hates wearing cotton knickers and most of all, her Mother still buying them for her!!! To her annoyance, she sneaks to the local pub and has seen Ms Williams there, so to think she can be spanked by her is so embarrassing, not to say the least!
The girls - Amy, Emily, Sue, Ann, Ruth, Lucy, Carol, and Jane.
Ms Stein, very strict headmistress, who administers the cane when needed.
Ms Andrews - the school sectary, whos’ sole job is to check what the pupils are wearing before they are punished. Miss Andrew is, the school secreta always to do a uniform inspection before the girls go into the headmistress office with her punishment, for either a smacked bottom or the cane. She also has sometimes to calm their nerves down before their punishment and tell them why they are expecting a sore bottom. She also keeps some pairs of approved cotton knickers in her desk drawer. She can be quite sympathetic to the girls before any spanking and helps them along with the process. Tends, to ask a lot of questions however, if they are not wearing cotton underwear!
Genre: Realistic
Setting: England, 1980, strict school.
 
One of the first things you have to realize with a story like you outlined it, is the rule on underage characters.
It is hard enough to have a character being 18. You can't suddenly have characters 18 and above get spanked without them enduring it in earlier grades.
 
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