remypare
Pope
- Joined
- May 2, 2022
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Hi all,
Longtime lurker, recent author. I recently decided to reignite my interest in erotic writing by writing out some fantasies that have been bouncing around in my mind. I'm two stories deep so far, with a third pending. Before I get too far into the weeds I'd like to get some feedback.
The first story tells the beginning phases of the fantasy. The second story continues the thread, and the third story (pending) will bring round one to it's logical conclusion.
I'm interested in feedback: what did you like and dislike about the story? What parts of my writing need improvement? What parts are working well? I'm open to any constructive criticism and feedback from my fellow Litsters.
Thanks, and happy reading!
Longtime lurker, recent author. I recently decided to reignite my interest in erotic writing by writing out some fantasies that have been bouncing around in my mind. I'm two stories deep so far, with a third pending. Before I get too far into the weeds I'd like to get some feedback.
The first story tells the beginning phases of the fantasy. The second story continues the thread, and the third story (pending) will bring round one to it's logical conclusion.
I'm interested in feedback: what did you like and dislike about the story? What parts of my writing need improvement? What parts are working well? I'm open to any constructive criticism and feedback from my fellow Litsters.
Thanks, and happy reading!