HotKittySpank
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REVISING THIS- a place to plop my thoughts : )
speak if you wish... thx.
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ok - i'm taking a chance here... wanted to explain myself on this poem and will nix this thread when you have all had your say : )
several responses came in regarding this poem:
Thunderstruck
Thunderstruck,
Her skirt
Catching light
Played on air,
Catching glimpses
Through trees,
Wary eye
On the incoming storm,
Compass spinning,
She’s
Catching crumbs.
Yeah - a week later i do agree that it was not yet complete. I was thinking about little red riding hood on her walk through the woods and then threw in the idea of gretel and her crumbs. I was pondering the idea of ignoring the inevitable - does that make sense?
I will work in it some more and get back to you... feedback anyone?
speak if you wish... thx.
.......
ok - i'm taking a chance here... wanted to explain myself on this poem and will nix this thread when you have all had your say : )
several responses came in regarding this poem:
Thunderstruck
Thunderstruck,
Her skirt
Catching light
Played on air,
Catching glimpses
Through trees,
Wary eye
On the incoming storm,
Compass spinning,
She’s
Catching crumbs.
Yeah - a week later i do agree that it was not yet complete. I was thinking about little red riding hood on her walk through the woods and then threw in the idea of gretel and her crumbs. I was pondering the idea of ignoring the inevitable - does that make sense?
I will work in it some more and get back to you... feedback anyone?
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