Sexy Stepmom

[BansheeDaddy23]

Not sure if this is the right section for this but here’s what I wrote:


My sexy stepmom



You’re in the house cleaning Dishes and I come home from work. You don’t hear me come in and you’re in your summer dress swaying to your music.



The whole day i had been thinking of you doing things to me. I was hard most of the day and couldn’t wait anymore.



I sneak up behind you and whisper: Hi beautiful. I reach my hands through the arm holes in your dress and massage your chest.



You: Honey what are you doing??



Me: What I’ve dreamed of since you married my dad. Making you mine.



I bend you over the counter and I slide your panties to the side



You: Baby no you cant! You’re my son!



Me: I’m your stepson and i want you as mine



I slide my cock into your ass and thrust slowly at first while i add a little coconut oil from the bottle on the counter, then go deeper and faster.



You: BABY NO STOP! MMmmm!! YOU CANT FUCK ME, NO



I slide in deep and hold myself there while i grab your shoulders and pull you close.



Me: I know my dad isn’t doing anything with you anymore. And i also saw the empty box for the dildo you bought. Plus i found your old diary and you were such a slut werent you. You’d do anything



You: I tried to hide the box… MmmmmAhhhh Fuck… and you read my di-



Me: Stop. I know you now and know this is an act. *moves to your pussy which is soaked and start fucking you hard*



You mumble: *Oh fuck yes*



Me: Should i stop?



You: MMMmmm Fuck no



Me: Are you my personal free use slut now? Just like you always wanted?



You: Yes yes *moans*



Me: Good. You’ll leave my dad and be mine. And i want full access any time. Even in public, understand? And call me daddy



You: Yes… MmmFuck… Daddy… Don’t stop



I cum deep inside of you and fill you completely full



Me: I’m just getting started… My slut

 

[Rob_Royale]

I love a good stepmom story. I just posted one. This one is good, but abrupt. Add on some build up, eye contact, flirting, seduction etc.
That way when he pushes her into the counter she's more receptive.

Not sure if this is the right section for this but here’s what I wrote:


My sexy stepmom



You’re in the house cleaning Dishes and I come home from work. You don’t hear me come in and you’re in your summer dress swaying to your music.



The whole day i had been thinking of you doing things to me. I was hard most of the day and couldn’t wait anymore.



I sneak up behind you and whisper: Hi beautiful. I reach my hands through the arm holes in your dress and massage your chest.



You: Honey what are you doing??



Me: What I’ve dreamed of since you married my dad. Making you mine.



I bend you over the counter and I slide your panties to the side



You: Baby no you cant! You’re my son!



Me: I’m your stepson and i want you as mine



I slide my cock into your ass and thrust slowly at first while i add a little coconut oil from the bottle on the counter, then go deeper and faster.



You: BABY NO STOP! MMmmm!! YOU CANT FUCK ME, NO



I slide in deep and hold myself there while i grab your shoulders and pull you close.



Me: I know my dad isn’t doing anything with you anymore. And i also saw the empty box for the dildo you bought. Plus i found your old diary and you were such a slut werent you. You’d do anything



You: I tried to hide the box… MmmmmAhhhh Fuck… and you read my di-



Me: Stop. I know you now and know this is an act. *moves to your pussy which is soaked and start fucking you hard*



You mumble: *Oh fuck yes*



Me: Should i stop?



You: MMMmmm Fuck no



Me: Are you my personal free use slut now? Just like you always wanted?



You: Yes yes *moans*



Me: Good. You’ll leave my dad and be mine. And i want full access any time. Even in public, understand? And call me daddy



You: Yes… MmmFuck… Daddy… Don’t stop



I cum deep inside of you and fill you completely full



Me: I’m just getting started… My slut

 

[LupusDei]

I would advise to get rid of the "you" for more traditional literally form. It's very hard to get right (since you can't describe almost anything for the "you" character without massively offputting just about any reader).

 

[ericrodman101]

This is good. It's usually the stepmom who seduces the son in porn. Here he not only takes her in the kitchen without warning or a come on, but starts their very first encounter by taking her from behind up the ass using coconut oil off the counter. It jumps a lot of hurdles straight away, but I good writers always jump straight into the action. How old is the stepson? He's coming home from work so are we talking a professional, or yardwork, McDonalds, paper route? Maybe have him come home from college or maybe even senior year high school now that he's turned 18 and thinks it's time he staked his claim.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I love a good stepmom story. I just posted one. This one is good, but abrupt. Add on some build up, eye contact, flirting, seduction etc.
That way when he pushes her into the counter she's more receptive.

Okay, I did one in the stepmom/vehicle trope too. I think I had an unusual take on it. "The Biggest Little City in The World."

https://classic.literotica.com/s/trucker-mom-1

https://www.jimreedtrucksales.com/w...-foot-box-truck-for-sale-bergen-county-nj.jpg

 

[Rob_Royale]

Okay, I did one in the stepmom/vehicle trope too. I think I had an unusual take on it. "The Biggest Little City in The World."

https://classic.literotica.com/s/trucker-mom-1

https://www.jimreedtrucksales.com/w...-foot-box-truck-for-sale-bergen-county-nj.jpg

I was referring to Evelyn Ensnared actually. And I did read yours and liked it.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I was referring to Evelyn Ensnared actually. And I did read yours and liked it.

Thanks! Okay, I wasn't sure which of your two stories you were referring to.