When the hero doesn't show

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Donna, wife of FBI agent Bob Hastings opens the door into her garage one morning to find three armed men standing there smiling at her. She darts backward into the arms of a huge man who has her against the wall in an eye blink.

"We told your husband not to mess with the Zapatos cartel. Now you're coming with us."

Blindfolded, she's stuffed into her own car but after a few miles, she's transferred to some sort of van.

Now she's in captivity and surrounded by leering gang members. "Any minute now." That's what she thinks. "Any minute, Bob and his pals will come busting in here and save me."

Days start to crawl by and it doesn't happen. When the boss walks in and drops his pants, she has a choice to make. What will she do to get through that day and the days after? What will she do to save herself? And what will she do when she finally escapes or is rescued?
 
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If you want me to like the story, the boss of the Cartel immediately becomes humiliated for having his dick bitten off by a very savage and desperate woman. Sure, they beat her to death afterwards, but she died with a smile on her bloody face. :D
 
Plot twist: She WANTED to get captured because she had a tracking device in her 'coochie' and now the secret hideout of the cartel is known. Her husband might be working for the FBI but she's a trained spy and assassin. She breaks free and gives the signal. Moments later, Bob, Rob, a snob and some knob take down the mob. Then they walk out, and the whole cartel operation and headquarters explode for some reason. They don't look at the explosion, they just keep walking, hand in hand. Power couple. Roll credits.
 
Plot twist: She WANTED to get captured because she had a tracking device in her 'coochie' and now the secret hideout of the cartel is known. Her husband might be working for the FBI but she's a trained spy and assassin. She breaks free and gives the signal. Moments later, Bob, Rob, a snob and some knob take down the mob. Then they walk out, and the whole cartel operation and headquarters explode for some reason. They don't look at the explosion, they just keep walking, hand in hand. Power couple. Roll credits.
Sign me up for that. Or cast Gabrielle Anwar's Burn Notice character in the heroine's role and Michael, Sam, and Jesse as her buds. Cartel made a very big mistake. LOL. :D
 
Plot twist: She WANTED to get captured because she had a tracking device in her 'coochie' and now the secret hideout of the cartel is known. Her husband might be working for the FBI but she's a trained spy and assassin. She breaks free and gives the signal. Moments later, Bob, Rob, a snob and some knob take down the mob. Then they walk out, and the whole cartel operation and headquarters explode for some reason. They don't look at the explosion, they just keep walking, hand in hand. Power couple. Roll credits.
That's good stuff. Well done.
 
Plot twist: She WANTED to get captured because she had a tracking device in her 'coochie' and now the secret hideout of the cartel is known. Her husband might be working for the FBI but she's a trained spy and assassin. She breaks free and gives the signal. Moments later, Bob, Rob, a snob and some knob take down the mob. Then they walk out, and the whole cartel operation and headquarters explode for some reason. They don't look at the explosion, they just keep walking, hand in hand. Power couple. Roll credits.

Let me take it further, she waited days for the boss to show up, and, strange as it sounds, the only way to definitely identify him was by his remarkable member...
 
Plot twist: She WANTED to get captured because she had a tracking device in her 'coochie' and now the secret hideout of the cartel is known. Her husband might be working for the FBI but she's a trained spy and assassin. She breaks free and gives the signal. Moments later, Bob, Rob, a snob and some knob take down the mob. Then they walk out, and the whole cartel operation and headquarters explode for some reason. They don't look at the explosion, they just keep walking, hand in hand. Power couple. Roll credits.
Love it. The idea of her getting raped by the cartel was giving me really sad angry ickie vibes. That she's owning the situation here is awesome.

If we wanted to add something beyond power couple and their erotic coupling, we could have Rob's team run a train on willing wife with Rob's permission - in celebration of the victory. As Rob and team have done with other willing wives of willing team members many a time.
 
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