Do you get aroused.....

when you write erotica? Guess who came to bed at 4:40am feeling frisky.

Orally Yours

By Debbiexxx

Time seems to stop as we play
Softly touch me, you tell me, firmly
Lingering, soft strokes, featherlike
Upon your upper, inner thigh

Higher, higher, bolder I become
Moving, till I hold your prick in hand
You groan, I feel you stiffen in need
I lower my mouth to moisten your head

My body responds to the sensations
Of your now erect member between my lips
I wriggle, wanting to feel your touch
Your hand strokes my hair, grabbing

Encouraging me to slide up and down
My tongue laps at your excited precum
Tasting upon my palate your body fluid
You taste salty to me, mixed with sultry sweet

Your hand wanders slowly down my body
A teasing touch upon my aroused skin
My body aflame for you, oral pleasure a rush
I take you all the way in, my body wanting the same

I cannot wait much longer, I feel an urgent need
You know but make me wait, your strokes slow
Ignoring my need, prolonging your pleasure
Whispering softly to me, how great it feels

Taking your tight balls into my mouth, moaning as I do
I feel an urge to press my moist flesh into your hand
Animalistic instinct to mate overrides my self respect
I want you, need you to fill me inside, lusting for you

Hard in my mouth, precum in my throat, I feel your need
I pause, looking upon your proud face, aflame with want
My thighs brush together, my pussy walls I squeeze
I feel an urgent sexual need but want to pleasure you

My mouth tightens as I suck , lick and lap at you
Watching your face as I grind my hips in desire
It arouses me more as I see your eyes squeezed shut
"Oh God. " Emerging involuntarily from your lips

Thrusting hips as I too ride the pleasure wave of orgasm
Your dick swells with urgent need as I suck and swallow
I cry out in esctasy, my body responding to yours
My pussy juices flow, a small trickle of pure excitement


No there is no prize for the correct answer.

Yes, usually every time I write. and damn I wanted a prize.

Nope, I don't get het up writing erotica. If I do I stop writing until I've "turned it off" so to speak. Serious arousal and writing do not mix well.

bigrednz is just teasing me.
I haven't been writing in awhile. So when he read this poem he put two and two together.
But it was more like, the early morning light and watching him peacefully sleep that caused the friskiness.

*walks in muttering*... Dirty, rotten, lucky, bastard...

debbiexxx said:

bigrednz is just teasing me.
I haven't been writing in awhile.

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Yeh Yeh, head to the SRP board you two, lol

KillerMuffin said:

Nope, I don't get het up writing erotica. If I do
I stop writing until I've "turned it off" so to speak.
Serious arousal and writing do not mix well.

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I don't get aroused writing erotica either......I've been
asked that question a number of times......I do agree
w/ KM's statement about serious arousal and writing
not mixing well.....I think its a distraction from either/or.....

tigerjen said:

I don't get aroused writing erotica either......I've been
asked that question a number of times......I do agree
w/ KM's statement about serious arousal and writing
not mixing well.....I think its a distraction from either/or.....

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Oh for christs sake get over it you're a two bit porn writer not Emily Bronte!

Dammit, you guys! Debbie, how can ya do this to me? I come online and I'm barely awake and you put that out there for a lusty wench to see.

Damn kiwis anyhow.

SweetCherry said:

Dammit, you guys! Debbie, how can ya do this to me? I come online and I'm barely awake and you put that out there for a lusty wench to see.

Damn kiwis anyhow.

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SweetCherry said:

Dammit, you guys! Debbie, how can ya do this to me? I come online and I'm barely awake and you put that out there for a lusty wench to see.

Damn kiwis anyhow.

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Damn kiwi's? We do these things to you on purpose! Was it good for you? BTW If you come online is it messy? *grin*

Personal Disclaimer, I hold no responsibilty at all for bigrednz's comments nor opinions. I maybe married to him but he is a big boy and responsible for what he says, not me. Thanks

debbiexxx said:

Damn kiwi's? We do these things to you on purpose! Was it good for you? BTW If you come online is it messy? *grin*

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Cheeky bitch!

Well, I did come online a couple days ago. It wasn't messy tho.

SweetCherry said:

Cheeky bitch!

Well, I did come online a couple days ago. It wasn't messy tho.

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Yahoo, SweetCherry called me a bitch!

debbiexxx said:

Yahoo, SweeCherry called me a bitch!

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Debs, has anyone ever told you that you're insane? I mean that in the nicest possible way, of course.

SweetCherry said:

Debs, has anyone ever told you that you're insane? I mean that in the nicest possible way, of course.

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Of course it is a compliment in New Zealand. Hasn't Draco told you about this quaint tradition.?

debbiexxx said:

Of course it is a compliment in New Zealand. Hasn't Draco told you about this quaint tradition.?

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I know it's a compliment, Debs. See my title?

SweetCherry said:

I know it's a compliment, Debs. See my title?

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Uh oh. I am going insane. I see cheeky yank bitch, *shaking head* nothing about insanity though. Is it invisible? Can you see it? PS see sig line for new addendum *groan*

debbiexxx said:

Uh oh. I am going insane. I see cheeky yank bitch, *shaking head* nothing about insanity though. Is it invisible? Can you see it?

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Hey, I'm a yank in love with a kiwi. Ther's nothing more insane than that.

SweetCherry said:

Hey, I'm a yank in love with a kiwi. Ther's nothing more insane than that.

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Oh no, that was to be expected. Kiwi's are a wonderful species, we are clever, sexual, openminded. insane, kind, bulletproof and very dynamic. 'nite for now

Nighty nite, Debs. Go snuggle with your Mike for a while. I'm sure he'll love every minute of it.