I'm getting into this a bit late, and I'd love to see your story. One commenter (RoyceConnors) suggested a story of gestural interactions between deaf folks. A similar approach would be between people (not necessarily too intelligent) sharing no common language. Or people who are physically too separated to speak, who can only communicate via hand signals and body language (I've seen mutual-peeper stories using such plus hand-written notes). Are numerous possibilities.
Hypoxia's Literotica postings
- "You write well, so STFU and do more writing. Wimp." -JAMESBJOHNSON, bullshitter
(incest-SF) - "think you have had too much sex with your banana slug. as a writer you SUCK. delete and stop posting until you learn how to write..." -Anon
What Is Cheating?
(essay) - "Rumblin', stumblin', bumblin' BARF! I don't think an editor would help this mess. Was there a point? There certainly didn't seem to be a storyline." -Anon
Under His Eyes
(LW-satire) - "YOU ARE A SICK FUCK. WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THIS HORRIBLY VILE STORY. THIS IS HUMANITY AT ITS WORST. I ONLY SKIMMED TO SEE WHAT CRAP IT WAS. YOU NEED TO BE LOCKED AWAY FROM ANYONE YOU COULD HURT FOR REAL. MINUS 1 BILLION ISN'T ENOUGH. DON'T WRITE ANYMORE." -Anon
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