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Old 01-20-2014, 02:08 PM   #1
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Clothed Female, Nude Man Story?

Anyone looking for a hot story about a clothed female and a nude man (CFNM)?

If so, please check out my first story for LitErotica and feel free to leave any comment!

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-first-cfnm-experience-1

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Old 01-22-2014, 08:01 PM   #2
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Anyone looking for a hot story about a clothed female and a nude man (CFNM)?

If so, please check out my first story for LitErotica and feel free to leave any comment!

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-first-cfnm-experience-1

Thanks!
I read it and as far as stories go, it's really short. My one complaint with it would be that it's written like you're telling someone about an event that happened, if that makes any sense. It's written in the past-tense and reads kind of like a police report. It sounds like you're imaginative and know the details of a good story, though.
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