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Old 08-07-2017, 03:14 PM   #851
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Old 08-12-2017, 01:42 PM   #852
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Old 08-22-2017, 06:38 PM   #853
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Thank you, Erectus for commenting on ' Ms. Buttocks met Mr. Cane..!'
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Old 08-28-2017, 12:14 AM   #854
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Thanks to Ash for his kind comments and favouring Reading Lin Tao.

Thanks too to legerdemer for her comments on Sunglasses
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Old 08-29-2017, 12:27 AM   #855
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Thank you Bro to Erectus for comprehensive comments on my BDSM poem Mistress of Pain!!!
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Old 08-29-2017, 01:47 PM   #856
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I humbly offer words of gratitude to Tazz and greenmountaineer and AlwaysHungry for the kind comments/words on one of my poems. I've been sort of metaphorically lost at sea in rejuvenating that inner juicy joy of squeezing out expression be they sentences, lines, paragraphs, stanzas, with or without erotic flavors, and that indescribable feeling of tapping into a bottomless well of wordplay-generation, and I do not wish to spend the effort in counting the months this situation has persisted. The joy of starting with a random word or sense or act and freely rambling from there - turned into a sort of tiptoe on a vast field littered with traps. Starts and stops - starts and stops - starts and stops. So again, thank you.
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Old 08-30-2017, 01:11 AM   #857
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I humbly offer words of gratitude to Tazz and greenmountaineer and AlwaysHungry for the kind comments/words on one of my poems. I've been sort of metaphorically lost at sea in rejuvenating that inner juicy joy of squeezing out expression be they sentences, lines, paragraphs, stanzas, with or without erotic flavors, and that indescribable feeling of tapping into a bottomless well of wordplay-generation, and I do not wish to spend the effort in counting the months this situation has persisted. The joy of starting with a random word or sense or act and freely rambling from there - turned into a sort of tiptoe on a vast field littered with traps. Starts and stops - starts and stops - starts and stops. So again, thank you.
Timmmnhmmm . How nice to see you
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Old 08-30-2017, 10:15 AM   #858
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Old 09-03-2017, 10:27 PM   #859
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Thanks to mer, and Jenipher for favouring and hmmnmm for commenting on Mature Girl

Further thanks to Ash for favouring and mer, hmmnmm, Taz and even anon for commenting on There there
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Old 09-22-2017, 05:17 PM   #860
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Old 10-16-2017, 04:46 AM   #861
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Thank you Tazz for commenting on 'bottom......so blank..."
Thank you Erectus for your analytics of my erotic poems " JLo vs. Kim" and ' Bottom.....so blank......"
Thank you Senna for your critical comments on my non Erotic ' Las Vegas"!
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Old 10-31-2017, 12:28 AM   #862
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Thank you Tazz for comments on my illustrated poem "illustrated.......skirts........colour".
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Old 10-31-2017, 04:41 AM   #863
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Thank you Tazz for again commenting on my Illustrated poem ' Buttocks'.....
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Old 11-04-2017, 09:22 PM   #864
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Old 11-11-2017, 02:59 PM   #865
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Many thanks to Ashesh 9 for favoring and to Tazz for commenting on ISOLATED CRETAN VILLAGE
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Old 11-17-2017, 12:57 AM   #866
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Thank you champagne for your comment on First tasting I was thinking more of the human animal. Is she really submissive or drawing him in to fulfil her needs?
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Old 12-03-2017, 02:35 AM   #867
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Thank you Tazz and Erectus for comments on Multilingual.
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Old 12-03-2017, 03:19 AM   #868
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Thank you Senna for explanatory comments on your earlier comment and the compliment on ' Who are you: LasVegas.
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Old 12-04-2017, 01:14 PM   #869
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Thank you Erectus for complimenting Animesh in my illustrated Poem " from a father to his departed son" .
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Old 12-06-2017, 03:57 PM   #870
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Thank you Erectus for your compliments on my erotic poem : Appropriate Etiquette !
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Old 12-06-2017, 07:06 PM   #871
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Old 12-12-2017, 11:09 PM   #872
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Old 01-04-2018, 06:47 PM   #873
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I appreciate the comments made, both in this form and on the posted poem, for "Zenith." I apologize for the rather mundane title. My excuse is that it finishes a sequence.

Your points are all well taken. Thanks again.
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Old 01-04-2018, 07:21 PM   #874
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I appreciate the comments made, both in this form and on the posted poem, for "Zenith." I apologize for the rather mundane title. My excuse is that it finishes a sequence.

Your points are all well taken. Thanks again.
No apology needed, Ellen, IMO. It was a good poem. I got the intent of the title. Comments were intended to be thought provoking.
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Old 01-06-2018, 01:20 PM   #875
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Whispers by Mark-J is a little "Hallmark-ish" with its rhyming scheme but the beat is steady and the rhyming true.

There are more, of course. Go read, find your favourite, leave a comment.
Thank you for the call out. I was aware of the Hallmark-ish (as you so charmingly put it) nature of the work. In all fairness it was one of my earlier efforts when I was trying to go to straight poetry instead of song lyrics.

But what the hell, if ya don't post 'em, no one reads 'em.

Thanks for the chuckle hehheheheh...
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