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Old 11-21-2013, 02:36 PM   #51
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Old 11-21-2013, 02:39 PM   #52
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Old 11-21-2013, 02:46 PM   #53
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Old 11-21-2013, 03:01 PM   #54
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Old 11-21-2013, 03:14 PM   #55
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forethought

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Old 11-21-2013, 03:26 PM   #56
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Old 11-21-2013, 04:50 PM   #57
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Old 11-21-2013, 04:54 PM   #58
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Heated hand
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congratulatory

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Old 11-21-2013, 04:56 PM   #59
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Old 11-21-2013, 04:58 PM   #60
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Old 11-21-2013, 05:13 PM   #61
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hehehe...nice...but....

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Old 11-21-2013, 05:15 PM   #62
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hehehe...nice...but....

On a different trail

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in that case:

excavatory

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Old 11-21-2013, 05:24 PM   #63
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Working on It

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Old 11-21-2013, 05:40 PM   #64
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Old 11-21-2013, 05:48 PM   #65
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Old 11-21-2013, 05:52 PM   #66
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Old 11-21-2013, 07:17 PM   #67
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 11-21-2013, 08:28 PM   #68
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 11-21-2013, 09:31 PM   #70
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Old 11-21-2013, 09:47 PM   #71
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 11-21-2013, 10:41 PM   #73
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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