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Old 11-18-2013, 02:15 PM   #26
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Old 11-19-2013, 08:56 AM   #31
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Old 11-19-2013, 11:10 PM   #34
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Old 11-19-2013, 11:24 PM   #35
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Old 11-20-2013, 12:06 AM   #36
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Old 11-20-2013, 12:56 AM   #37
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Old 11-21-2013, 03:22 AM   #42
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Old 11-21-2013, 01:25 PM   #44
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
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