Originally Posted by TimRailing
I also have two stories pending. I am just getting back into writing and am curious why my average rating is 3.5 when many people seem to have all there stories a 4.5
Is it my plots?
Re Conjugal Visit:
No, most people read these stories just to get off. Having a MC that is a submissive male and a premature ejaculator severely narrows the number of readers who will enjoy (or relate to) your story -- posting in the Loving Wives category only makes the situation worse. Especially, when the nature of the story (fetish) isn't spelled out in your slug.
That said, if you're happy with what you've written, I wouldn't worry about the scores you receive.
If you are truly looking for advice on improving your writing:
Drop the long, irrelevant backstory at the beginning. It's boring and does little to advance the plot.
Open with an action incident -- like the foreman of the jury reading his guilty verdict in the courtroom, and then fill in the back story as you go along.
The sex scenes seem to be rushed, and mostly told in summary, almost as an afterthought.