Old 02-10-2008, 09:24 AM   #19026
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"Never allow someone to be your priority while allowing yourself to be their option."

"You may have a fresh start any moment you choose, for this thing that we call 'failure' is not the falling down, but the staying down." Mary Pickford (1892–1979) Canadian actress, co-founder of United Artists

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Old 02-10-2008, 09:26 AM   #19027
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Old 02-10-2008, 09:37 AM   #19028
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A late welcome for Chargergirl

Part of it is enjoying hearing it form women's point of view and part because men are more visual, but I love erotica written by women.
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Old 02-10-2008, 09:41 AM   #19029
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Old 02-10-2008, 09:51 AM   #19030
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Is it obvious to you guys when a story is written by a woman, without knowing it beforehand? Sometimes I think my writing is to "girly".
I think it is, but so what? Should Hemingway have written less manly? We are who we are and we should write that way. Should Eugene O'Neil written with less angst or Tennesse Willams less conflicted?(I'm obviously a drama fan.)
Also, there is a differance between "girly" and "girlish."
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Old 02-10-2008, 10:14 AM   #19031
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Old 02-11-2008, 02:07 AM   #19032
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When I write, my intent is to tell a story. I hope the readers will enjoy it and I try to make them reasonable and let the characters have merit.

I don't write like a "man" - I think - I try to "hear" the dialogue in my head and hope it comes across all right.

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Old 02-11-2008, 02:58 AM   #19033
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Old 02-11-2008, 03:08 AM   #19034
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Brettj, you try to write as yourself, right?
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Old 02-11-2008, 03:18 AM   #19035
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Old 02-11-2008, 03:31 AM   #19036
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Yes, I like there to be real emotion involved in my stories. They need to love; there needs to be a reason for them to do what they do.
Exactly! I think that's why a lot of us are in this thread, because we love the people we have incestuous thoughts about. Well, at least I do. lol
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Old 02-11-2008, 03:32 AM   #19037
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I'm just saying, If you are a girl and you write like a girl, and if you are a guy and you write like a guy...so what? I can't believe I have to argue this point.
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Old 02-11-2008, 03:42 AM   #19038
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Old 02-11-2008, 05:09 AM   #19039
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I'm just saying, If you are a girl and you write like a girl, and if you are a guy and you write like a guy...so what? I can't believe I have to argue this point.
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Old 02-11-2008, 05:26 AM   #19040
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Good morning Geronimo and the rest of you gentlemen.

Beurreblanc, I do indeed write under my own name. If you are looking to find my work, all one has to do is click on the link under my name. As to writing as myself - no, I try to write with the voices of the characters. I want their voices heard, not necessarily my own.

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Old 02-11-2008, 06:39 AM   #19041
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"You may have a fresh start any moment you choose, for this thing that we call 'failure' is not the falling down, but the staying down." Mary Pickford (1892–1979) Canadian actress, co-founder of United Artists

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Old 02-11-2008, 06:42 AM   #19042
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Don't know about you all, but it's cold here, zero with minus fifteen wind chill.

I just wanted a guys' perspective, whether or not they could tell when a woman had written something, if they didn't know the gender beforehand. That's all I was getting at. Nothing more, nothing less. Please don't argue, guys. Please?

Thanks to everyone that answered. Have a wonderful day. Stay safe.

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ahh, that explains it. i shoulda read back.

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i couldn't tell george elliot was a woman.
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Old 02-11-2008, 07:08 AM   #19043
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I wasn't arguing CHARGERGIRL, just answering a question. I have written stories in a very "female" style and some that were a bit more macho. If you read "Faer-ily Bewitched" I have been told it has its moments that are quite feminine. And I seem to have a fair share of female readers that enjoy my style.

Once I get a chance to read your stuff, I may offer an opinion. But as long as a story is well-written, I will likely enjoy it.

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Old 02-11-2008, 07:20 AM   #19044
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Old 02-11-2008, 07:27 AM   #19045
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One thing I have figured out about posting stories here CHARGERGIRL is you can almost never tell what will appeal to who.

I have had stories I really liked and enjoyed writing go down in flames. For a whlle, it got to me [ and still does, to a small degree ] but as long as I write to my best abilities, that is what is important.

I have a lot of female readers and that pleases me. I even have some who have become faithful readers.

I hope you will find your voice more and more as you continue to write out here.

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Old 02-11-2008, 07:29 AM   #19046
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One thing I have figured out about posting stories here CHARGERGIRL is you can almost never tell what will appeal to who.
I have had stories I really liked and enjoyed writing go down in flames. For a whlle, it got to me [ and still does, to a small degree ] but as long as I write to my best abilities, that is what is important.

I have a lot of female readers and that pleases me. I even have some who have become faithful readers.

I hope you will find your voice more and more as you continue to write out here.

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Old 02-11-2008, 07:36 AM   #19047
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Not quite sure what you meant by your last post Geronimo.

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Old 02-11-2008, 07:49 AM   #19050
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