help with lyrics and spice
Unfortunately, I do not speak French beyond a few words, but my late wife did. Like Gomez Addams in "the Addams Family" it drove me wild when she whispered something in my ear and then said it again in French. Such a beautiful language!
A few of the characters in my stories say something in French for just that reason.
In Moonlight Window Chapter 2, one of the characters sings "Parlez Moi d'Amour" by Lucienne Boyer. Per Literotica guidelines on copyright material, I was only able to put in a couple of lines. I received a comment that I needed to correct one line of the song. I copied and pasted the following from one of several lyrics websites that all have the same lyric"
"Parlez moi d'amour
Redites-moi des choses tenders . . ."
Is that correct, or are the websites wrong?
Also, I need the proper response for a 22-year-old when she meets the father of her boyfriend. The father kisses her hand, saying, "enchanté." I have found several responses, but I need the correct situational response for these specific characters. What would her response be? It is suggested at this point that they both speak French.
If anyone would like to suggest erotic phrases that a woman would say just before she does something related to the phrase, I will give credit in the story to the submitter. I need woman to man and woman to woman examples.
Examples in English would be
"You have such sensuous nipples," just before hissing them.
"I'm going to kiss every rib as I undress you," before taking off a shirt or lowering a slip.
These all should be about romance and foreplay, as I am trying to write about romance and relationships rather than just sex.
Again, I will credit all whose material I use in the Author's Notes section of my stories.
Thank you . . . uh, well . . . merci!