Old 04-18-2013, 05:46 PM   #1
javawarrior
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Incest story

I wasn't sure where to put this, but I've revised my incest story. Based on some feedback I got, I changed some dialgue, but I also added an extra thing at the end to make it even more interesting. I hope I succeeded.

My Blood

If you read it, let me know what you think of the changes, and if you haven't, let me know anyway!
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