Story Feedback. Itasca by Art
I am new to the forum but have been reading many stories for quite some time.
One story in particular that has stuck out for me is Itasca submitted by Art. I found this story to be very well written and drew you into the story as if you were the lead character in the story. The descriptions and leads into the sex were very well orchestrated and lent a great deal of eroticism to them. The details of how the characters in this story learned each other through the entire road trip and eventually became entwined souls is a story that almost everyone can relate to and fantasizes about.
I imagine the girl in the story to be a very beautiful woman that would be able to fulfill the sexual fantasies of any man. I really wish there were more stories like this one. Good work on the story Art. I thank you.