nice guy becomes a beast

[hmmnmm]

This one's been rolling around my head a few days, but it might be too much to manage.

A guy who's basically nice and mellow and learned from an early age to respect women. He adores beautiful women but he's on the shy side and many women like him because he's cute and sweet. But he very seldom gets laid.

Somehow he is transported to another time and/or place. In this place the pillaging and plundering of villages is the norm and women are taken against their will and used for serving the men.

The guy ends up taken in or adopted by a tribe or clan. They see he's okay. But he doesn't participate when they go off to plunder villages and carry off the women. He tried to explain that the world he comes from, such treatment of women is not acceptable. Of course the guys in this place cannot understand.

One night there's a knock on the new guy's door (he ends up with his own little hut) and there's a couple of the local villagers and they shove two young very beautiful women inside.

They explain that these two are extras from their latest plunders, and they are his. They've already been marked as his property. A gift. To help him better adapt.

He tries to tell them No Thanks but he has no choice. He is required to keep them. It is a grave insult to refuse gifts. And they leave him with these two beautiful women. He tries to be his mister nice guy self for as long as he can. Tries to show that he's from a more civilized time and place.

But they don't care. He is an enemy and they show no intention of cooperating and they sorely try his patience day in and day out. He has to keep them in some sort of restraint and can't let them out of his sight. They are wild. Vicious. Dangerous. They'd claw his eyes if they got the chance. They tried.

Then one night one of them pushes him over the edge and he throws her over the table and just fucks her brains out, and then grabs the other and fucks her brains out, then fucks the other again and the other and again, and he is immediately converted to the mind of this village. When he's not sleeping he's using one or both for some kind of sex. Of course they must always be restrained and they try to fight if they have the opportunity.

At this point I'm not sure. They could escape. He is required to hunt them down. Bring them back.

Maybe he winds up back in his original world, but much more aggressive and beastly than he was when he left.

More I think of it the more I like it - but it would require a helluva a lot of research.

[MatthewVett]

I like the basic idea. I've always liked the idea of time travel, probably because of Lest Darkness Fall. Someone from the future could easily help them with tactics and discipline, if not physical force, and become a chieftain. Have you seen the anime Oda no Yobuna? It's about a high school kid who gets sent back to the days of Oda Nobunaga, only a lot of famous figures are cute girls now, but he's able to use his historical knowledge to become a great asset. I'd imagine it a little bit like that.

[hmmnmm]

Originally Posted by MatthewVett

I like the basic idea. I've always liked the idea of time travel, probably because of Lest Darkness Fall. Someone from the future could easily help them with tactics and discipline, if not physical force, and become a chieftain. Have you seen the anime Oda no Yobuna? It's about a high school kid who gets sent back to the days of Oda Nobunaga, only a lot of famous figures are cute girls now, but he's able to use his historical knowledge to become a great asset. I'd imagine it a little bit like that.

Could get involved.
Looks like another I will add to the mountain of ideas never started, which is next to the other of those begun but abandoned. This was one of several signature obstacles I was always hitting my head on. Maybe it's an inner addiction to a sort of emotional pain infliction. I mean I love Literotica. But my actual story-writing abilities are on the feeble side. Something else I notice: if I've mapped out the story idea in my head it's much harder to get down to the writing of it (or the attempt at writing it) than it is to just start from scratch without knowing where things will end up. But then it always ends up a big mess. Would love to find focus and to dedicate, but I think it's hopeless - and keep forgetting it is hopeless. Yet these little idea nuggets never cease to wander along... those who actually write and complete stories: respect, big respect.

[dale124]

Sexually speaking, that's the kiss of death when a woman says, "You're a nice guy.............", because there's always a but that comes next in that sentence. The inference being that most girls don't seem to like nice guys. Which begs the question, do those two girls from the other world remain hostile or change their attitude over time once our hero stops being a nice guy?

[hmmnmm]

Originally Posted by dale124

Sexually speaking, that's the kiss of death when a woman says, "You're a nice guy.............", because there's always a but that comes next in that sentence. The inference being that most girls don't seem to like nice guys. Which begs the question, do those two girls from the other world remain hostile or change their attitude over time once our hero stops being a nice guy?

and a very good question

I guess that would be the story: how he changes - how they change. Probably be a good idea to get better picture who the girls are. On the one hand he is allied with an enemy tribe/clan. On the other, they get fucked really good.

Lots of ways it could go really. They may have relatives that wish to come and rescue them. Or they are as subject to pillaging and having their women taken as any other. Threat of losing property. Real affections could take root, grow.

Marauder. His inner marauder emerges. It could be a lengthy process of the war with himself too. Plenty potential for conflict on many fronts.

Could even go comedic.

Again, another long-term something that will go unfinished.