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Ok, I like the premise...
I can see it going a couple different ways. Nick, the harmless user, has scraped the bottom of the barrel for cash. Barely finding enough to pay rent. When his dealer shows up he's offered an opportunity:
1: (Pretty cliche) become a gigolo, servicing the women of the area as a new male section of the dealers escort service.
2: (A little more imaginative) go about seducing the wives of the more influential men in town. Perhaps this dealer is having some legal problems. Discovering the Police Chief's wife is a bit of a nympho, he has set up a private investigator to watch the woman and take pictures, video, and audio of the sex crazed wife.
In all honesty, the dealer knew Nick wasn't going to have the money. Nick never had the money, but for whatever reason the dealer took a liking to this kid. But it was time for the kid to become useful or pay up.
Both veins have possibility for future parts. The first, he goes off fucking as many women as he can find (again, less imaginative BUT more bang for your buck as you can write endless sexual encounters). The second, his seduction has left Nick in a very bad place. The police chief is sent a picture of this young man fucking his wife. When his wife leaves him, he blames Nick. How will Nick get this ex-cop off his trail??
Again, great idea. But what turns YOU on about it?
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