soflabbwlvr and BonnevilleFlats thank you for the replies.
soflabbwlvr - appreciate the critique! Very fair and honest. Sorry it was a boner killer!
Too answer your question why write it I hope the following will help.
I'm very interested in the Cheating wife/revenge scenario. Mainly in the Exposure/Pain/Revenge aspects. Can the marriage be saved? If so, what level of payback does the husband have to have in our to retain some dignity? If not, how does the husband move on?
I posted this story on an erotic site because most other cheating spouse/revenge sites won't deal with the sexual aspects that are KEY in these types of stories. This particular story is more 'non-erotic' than most that I'm working on.
True I will probably never write anything more erotic than what you might find in a bad romance novel. No doubt none of my stories will ever be considered 'stroke' material but i do hope that most will be considered erotic on some level!
Bonneville Flats - Fully agree that the main character goes overboard and begins losing sympathy from the reader! As a matter of fact, I started a post/poll discussing just that.
Would love to have additional feedback from you both, either here or via PMs!