First story posted ...

[ameliajax]

Now I'm biting my nails, hoping people read it, hoping they don't ... so hard when you send your babies out into the big bad world!

http://www.literotica.com/s/her-left-arm

[JackLuis]

I gave it a 5 for the unique setup.

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Originally Posted by ameliajax

Now I'm biting my nails, hoping people read it, hoping they don't ... so hard when you send your babies out into the big bad world!

http://www.literotica.com/s/her-left-arm

I read enough of your story to form an idea of your skill set. I say this because the category is low on my list of stuff that floats my boat. So understand that BDSM doesnt do it for me 99.99% of the time. The Marquis de Sade dont thrill me.

So here you are: Your tale is coherent and cohesive and you got the punctuation and spelling under control. The rest is my personal druthers: Get rid of the auxillary verbs and adverbs, they shout to the world, I CUT CORNERS! Rather than say WAS KNEELING say KNELT.

And dont worry about your babies.

[LaRascasse]

Originally Posted by ameliajax

Now I'm biting my nails, hoping people read it, hoping they don't ... so hard when you send your babies out into the big bad world!

http://www.literotica.com/s/her-left-arm

I read it and my main question is - are you sure it's in the right category?

If it's a roleplay, then I appear to have missed the punchline. Otherwise, it should be in nonhuman/scifi.

[ameliajax]

Originally Posted by LaRascasse

I read it and my main question is - are you sure it's in the right category?

If it's a roleplay, then I appear to have missed the punchline. Otherwise, it should be in nonhuman/scifi.

I was wondering the same thing. Should it? It is a D/s story, but it also takes place in a different sci-fi type world. I wasn't sure which category to put it in. I originally conceived it as a possible graphic novel ... but the sci-fi world takes a back seat for the D/s relationship ...

Should I change categories? Is that possible?