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Old 02-11-2013, 05:39 PM   #1
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So far in my story some sexy, dangerous, strong men start living next door to me. They're reformed convicts and addicts in a halfway house. Their animal magnitism is overwelming. They watch me garden and I tease them with my sexuality. But they are respectful and don't want to make the first move. I let them do chores for me for tips, then one day I let my favorite into my house. He licks my wet cunt giving me multiple orgasms then leaves quietly.... What might happen next?
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If they are dangerous ex-cons and addicts, why are they being respectful and don't want to make the first move? And if they don't want to make the first move, what happens that the "favorite" starts licking your cunt?
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So far in my story some sexy, dangerous, strong men start living next door to me. They're reformed convicts and addicts in a halfway house. Their animal magnitism is overwelming. They watch me garden and I tease them with my sexuality. But they are respectful and don't want to make the first move. I let them do chores for me for tips, then one day I let my favorite into my house. He licks my wet cunt giving me multiple orgasms then leaves quietly.... What might happen next?
This seems kind of abusive, taking advantage of reformed convicts and addicts, constantly trying to make them give in to their base desires. They're trying to reform and improve their lives, and you're enabling bad behavior.
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Old 02-18-2013, 06:21 PM   #5
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This seems kind of abusive, taking advantage of reformed convicts and addicts, constantly trying to make them give in to their base desires. They're trying to reform and improve their lives, and you're enabling bad behavior.
Could be that way.

But what if it was differently cast? Maybe the woman is capable of showing them something of what they should and might have. In other words, there's a potential for character development here, on both sides.

You might say, pussy shall lead them on the path to righteousness, and never shall they steal or rob or shoot dope again.
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