Mystery girl in my closet

[SillyBilly1993]

No problem!

[chocolatecookie3]

Originally Posted by JaxRhapsody

Can I please write this story too? I got a title, backstory, plot, all that stuff you're leaving out. I wanna write this so bad, I'll name the kid after you. It'll be a nice break from what I've been writting, could probably make it two chapters. Okay... I'm so writing this. There should be a contest to see who can write the best version.

A terrible story write-off!

[MatthewVett]

Originally Posted by chocolatecookie3

A terrible story write-off!

OK, so how about after the story's written, we have a riffing contest?

[JaxRhapsody]

I will so accredit you with the concept, anyone up for writing their own version- a cannonball run of contest where bragging rights is the purse? I'm starting tonight.

Edit to add I thought of three plots, one I'm keeping for myself the other two are

1: at some point he ask her name and googles her only to find a story where she was kidnapped, raped and beaten and locked in the closet till stockholm syndrome and nympomania set in. She freely walked around and chose to stay in the closet. One day he brought home another girl- she was jealous because she thought of herself as the house wife and started an argument. This gave the other girl a chance to escape as he killed her and stuffed her in the closet- X years ago. So he has been fucking a ghost. And if she was a virgin, she has this habit of bleeding during sex.

2: His parents house is a connected house like in Chicago or New York and strangely his closet has a door that leads to the closet in the house next door, unbeknownst to him and the girl next door discovers it and spots him sleep with a hard on and decides to have fun with him, one day he wakes up and catches her in the act and every night she leaves through his closet and he always opens the door to find her not there.

[chocolatecookie3]

Originally Posted by JaxRhapsody

I will so accredit you with the concept, anyone up for writing their own version- a cannonball run of contest where bragging rights is the purse? I'm starting tonight.

Edit to add I thought of three plots, one I'm keeping for myself the other two are

1: at some point he ask her name and googles her only to find a story where she was kidnapped, raped and beaten and locked in the closet till stockholm syndrome and nympomania set in. She freely walked around and chose to stay in the closet. One day he brought home another girl- she was jealous because she thought of herself as the house wife and started an argument. This gave the other girl a chance to escape as he killed her and stuffed her in the closet- X years ago. So he has been fucking a ghost. And if she was a virgin, she has this habit of bleeding during sex.

2: His parents house is a connected house like in Chicago or New York and strangely his closet has a door that leads to the closet in the house next door, unbeknownst to him and the girl next door discovers it and spots him sleep with a hard on and decides to have fun with him, one day he wakes up and catches her in the act and every night she leaves through his closet and he always opens the door to find her not there.

Number 1 is messed up! That's all I have to say. I will try to think of a backstory.

[Airka4real]

Come on, it's totally believable!


She seductively pushes him back on his bed, crawls on top of him, and playfully ties him to the bed with the sheets.


Then she lets the rest of the gang in through the bedroom window and they proceed with the burglary as planned.

[MatthewVett]

Originally Posted by Airka4real

Come on, it's totally believable!


She seductively pushes him back on his bed, crawls on top of him, and playfully ties him to the bed with the sheets.


Then she lets the rest of the gang in through the bedroom window and they proceed with the burglary as planned.

OK, I like the story idea now.

[SillyBilly1993]

Originally Posted by chocolatecookie3

Number 1 is messed up! That's all I have to say. I will try to think of a backstory.

I agree with you I do not like the first one at all! Terribly sorry I forgot to mention one more rule! I do not want any bleeding, urine, feces, incest, rape, gay sex, Or any other gross things That I might feel unattracted to!

[JaxRhapsody]

Number one is a tad dark, I'll agree. What if her protoplasmic blood gave his nine inch dick six more inches? Billy, you just took out all the fun.

I was just running some ideas by. Something like maybe he was renovating an apartment and didn't know a homeless woman lived there, who moved through the wall spaces and he stayed over one night- working late to find this out on his own. You gave us the mystery chick, we're just trying to justify the cause. You should read some of my poems, nice and dark- yet the gothic romance I was trying to write sucked monkey balls.

[SillyBilly1993]

How about if the mystery girl is a criminal that has just robbed a gas station and is on the run from the police! She runs through the neighborhood and finds an open widow of a house and sneaks in. She finds out that she has entered in the bedroom of the 19 year old son of a overprotective mother. The teenage stud is walking his way to the room. The desperate 21 year old girl sneaks in his closet to hide. The young man enters his bedroom wearing only a small white towel that doesn't cover that much of his cock. The girl is now trapped in his closet! If she gets out now she'll get caught! She has to wait until the coast is clear so she watches the teen stud until he goes to sleep! Watching him through the wooden slats of the closet she gets shocked when she sees the dude drop his towel to the ground reveling his huge 9in cock. She get so turned on while peeping on the hung teen!

[MatthewVett]

How about the mystery girl is running away from this clueless kid with an overprotective mom and too much internet who can't read rulers correctly and thinks his 4 incher is really 9 inches, and she ends up hiding in a closet that belongs to an intelligent, mature individual who, when he discovers her, takes her to dinner so she can get a warm meal. They converse over dinner and realize they have a lot in common, and a relationship develops based on their matching personalities and shared interests?

[chocolatecookie3]

I thought we settled on 8in?

[SillyBilly1993]

Right! I meant 8 inches! Sorry!

[JaxRhapsody]

Originally Posted by SillyBilly1993

I agree with you I do not like the first one at all! Terribly sorry I forgot to mention one more rule! I do not want any bleeding, urine, feces, incest, rape, gay sex, Or any other gross things That I might feel unattracted to!

Okay then what if the closet is a gateway to an alternate reality and the girl is actually that paradigms version of him? I guess that would be more masturbation than incest...? She turned her knob to the left instead of the right and opened the gate.

[SillyBilly1993]

Still weird! I want the story to be more realistic as possible! One more thing! You must understand that my sex fantasys are more natural, normal, poetic, and cleaner compared to the bleeding virgin pussy. Sure my sex fantasys are very erotic, but erotic in rated r movie way mixed with a high class playboy adult movie where gorgeous girls ages 18 to 25 that look like Victoria's Secrets models with breasts the size of grapefruits and small melons who are expierenced in the art of sex make love to a good looking young man who wants to give his virginity!

[JaxRhapsody]

Im not saying its hard to make it realistic, but Ill downplay what I have in store.

[SillyBilly1993]

Thank you!

[rlaflamme]

There are so many ways you can go with the basic concept of the story line, it could be fun to write

[SillyBilly1993]

I agree!

[JaxRhapsody]

Originally Posted by rlaflamme

There are so many ways you can go with the basic concept of the story line, it could be fun to write

Then write a version. I think three of us are going to. Just give billy credit, since it was his idea.

[rlaflamme]

I'll give it a shot

[JaxRhapsody]

I just submitted my first chapter for Laurel to view. It's called In The Closet 1: somethings watching.

[Tmmldr]

Originally Posted by darkbeast

I'm not certain what the angle of the story is.

Is this a cock worship story where the woman 'needs' to be with him because of his extreme manhood? If so, how did she know about him? Is this a story about a complete stranger becoming his lover without his applying any effort other than having a cock he can toss over his shoulder? Is is a magical appearance (is she from an erotic Narnia? Is he from erotic Narnia also but doesn't realize it and thus explains his giant penis?)

Or is this just a quick wank story about a woman and a guy with a big cock?

First of all, I'd suggest she was in the closet because she lost a bet and had to deliver. Maybe it was a bet by the kid's big brother, and the girl worked at the strip club where he's a bouncer.

Next, regarding his cock. Rather than long, why not have it short, and the head as big around as a tennis ball? Then when he does the old in-and-out, the girl's getting continual extreme clit stimulation. He, meanwhiles, is extremely embarrassed and won't even date because he thinks his cock is malformed.

Now you've got a story. Girl helps boy overcome problem in his head with cock. Girl is experienced sexually. Girl is there to fuck, etc.

[SillyBilly1993]

I really like it! But can we forget the Tennis ball sized penis?!!?!! Can he just be an ordinary shy 18 year old with a 7in penis?

[Sean Renaud]

Wait. . .tennis ball sized penis? Is that like a rather short but really fat cock?

Originally Posted by LiquidMatthew

OK, so how about after the story's written, we have a riffing contest?

Or better yet, a couple years back there was a guy who was MST3King stories around here. It was pretty fucking funny.