I've been working on a story I believe can be easily drawn into
several chapters, and even a poser-style comic book series.
This college fraternity has access to an upscale beachhouse with a private beach each spring break; a legacy from a wealthy alumni.
They share this good fortune with a sister sorority. Both associations
are very powerful and popular, and are of course very protective of this beachhouse. Typically, early spring break arrivals would set up some privacy screens on the beach, creating a 'clothing optional' section of beach on this private property. Several frat boys would take
up residence, and keep the house clean and presentable for the absent
Some of the sorority girls arrive, set up the screens, and do some topless sun bathing. Up to four girls, I think. The screen slips while
they are not looking. A harbor patrol spots them, and reports them to the police for public indecency. The cops arrive, and the matter is settled without arrests or fines. But the beach is now banned to them
for the season, and the home owner was informed. The frat now has to beg to be allowed to keep access to the beachhouse, and agrees with the
homeowner to have the entire house spotlessly cleaned in order to keep
Of course, everyone blames to sorority girls for this crisis.
No one can use the private beach on spring break!
First the girls are treated to a 'reddest ass' type spanking contest
in front of both frat and soc. Then they are forced to put on maid costumes, serve the frat boys as slaves, and clean the house for an entire week. Or they will be kicked out of the sorority, blackballed professionally, or some other justification for this scene. The girls are humiliated, punished and spanked for the most trivial things.
Wow. Anyway, all that sets the scene. Lots you can do with that setup.
I plan on some basic power fantasy and revenge type situations.
One of the girls was a sergeant-of-arms at the sorority, kind of a bully
and not well liked. She is now at the mercy of lower class men she might
have punished or snubbed in the past. Another girl tries to get out
of her punishment with promises of sex. She gets spanked a lot as well.
This all ends with a scene where all the girls are being spanked in a
round-robin group scene before being released from punishment.
And then the whole situation is traced to a plot involving the bitchy
president of the sorority, and she is blackmailed into some private
So; college girls being punished as cleaning and serving slaves, humiliation, stripping and spanking for the tiniest things,
some personal payback for past offenses. Anyone want to come up with
some situations we can use in this setting? Did I build up the justification for this scene a little too much? Some input would be great.