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Old 06-06-2014, 07:56 PM   #1
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Can I ask for analysis of a story I did not write?

It's a story that was published on a now defunct website?
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Old 06-07-2014, 12:14 PM   #2
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It was a story I read a very long time ago on a website titled "The Writing Spider". The story was titled "Dream House", I believe it was about a young female interior decorator who is seduced by a security guard.

I read the story a long time ago, and it has stayed with me all these years. I think it was probably the first erotic story I read on the internet, and since then I've aimed (in vain) for a similar tone in my own stories/writing.

I'd love to analyse the story here, and to get all your thoughts/opinions...
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Old 06-07-2014, 01:09 PM   #3
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It's a story that was published on a now defunct website?
Yes. That is what the "story discussion circle" was originally intended for, before it become a second-hand search engine for stories whose titles escaped people.
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Old 06-07-2014, 02:46 PM   #4
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Here's the story I was referring to.

Short and simple, but I thought it was beautifully written.
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Old 06-07-2014, 04:11 PM   #5
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Yes. That is what the "story discussion circle" was originally intended for, before it become a second-hand search engine for stories whose titles escaped people.
I thought linking other story sites was spam and this board was to discuss Lit stories.
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Old 06-07-2014, 04:38 PM   #6
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Yeah. It has to be a Lit story. Sorry. I thought it was posted here, too.
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Old 06-07-2014, 04:58 PM   #7
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I honestly didn't mean it as spam.

How about if I copy and paste that story to Literotica (with a clear disclaimer stating that I didn't write it), and I would like to hear other people's opinion(s) on the story.

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Old 06-07-2014, 05:24 PM   #8
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I honestly didn't mean it as spam.

How about if I copy and paste that story to Literotica (with a clear disclaimer stating that I didn't write it), and I would like to hear other people's opinion(s) on the story.
How about if other people who want to read it to give an opinion PM you for the link instead?
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Old 06-07-2014, 05:29 PM   #9
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How about if other people who want to read it to give an opinion PM you for the link instead?
Well, what can I say.

As I noted on another thread earlier today, as a general rule, I'm not comfortable PM'ing on Literotica. I prefer if all my comments/interactions are out in the open.

If mods think this thread shouldn't be here - then, whatever they see fit, I guess.
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Old 06-07-2014, 05:29 PM   #10
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I honestly didn't mean it as spam.

How about if I copy and paste that story to Literotica (with a clear disclaimer stating that I didn't write it), and I would like to hear other people's opinion(s) on the story.
Literotica isn't going to accept a story that you don't declare you wrote yourself. This story isn't your property to repeat.
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