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Old 02-06-2013, 09:19 AM   #126
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Lance withdrawn. No little death yet...

Straddling Widow, proffering his sodden shaft.

Well, I know I am...
She slides down, caressing his back.

Ummm, if this is your idea of lurking I'm keen to see your hot action! .
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Old 02-06-2013, 02:16 PM   #127
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She slides down, caressing his back.

Ummm, if this is your idea of lurking I'm keen to see your hot action! .
Superhumanly strong hands guide panting mouth...

Glistening plumhead nudges kiss-bruised lips.
Why, Naoko, you'll have me blushing in a minute...
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Old 02-06-2013, 02:17 PM   #128
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Oops. Double post. I really am blushing now...
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Old 02-06-2013, 04:43 PM   #129
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Oops. Double post. I really am blushing now...
Especially as you used eight words!

Gosh, I thought you had got some action going that was so hot it had melted my personal connection to the entire AH for a while there! And I tried to post just now but it got lost in the ether. Luckily I've had four hungry cub scouts round to tea today and was preoccupied with churning out sufficient fish fingers and chocolate biscuits to stop them biting my fingers, so I was obliged to contain my soul (and Black Widow's mouth) in patience.
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Old 02-06-2013, 04:46 PM   #130
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Superhumanly strong hands guide panting mouth...

Glistening plumhead nudges kiss-bruised lips.
Why, Naoko, you'll have me blushing in a minute...
Lips brush web-delicate on pulsing Godhead.

Phew, at last I'm going to get to suck his cock! Never in the history of humankind can it have taken so long for a man, oh sorry God, to acquiesce to having his cock sucked!
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Old 02-07-2013, 02:41 AM   #131
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Lips brush web-delicate on pulsing Godhead.

Phew, at last I'm going to get to suck his cock! Never in the history of humankind can it have taken so long for a man, oh sorry God, to acquiesce to having his cock sucked!
Painting lips with passion's sweet juices.

Immortality gives one a whole new perspective - foreplay, teasing, tantalising, all are just means of brightening up a potentially tedious eternity. Besides, isn't it worth the wait...?
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Old 02-07-2013, 04:49 AM   #132
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Painting lips with passion's sweet juices.

Immortality gives one a whole new perspective - foreplay, teasing, tantalising, all are just means of brightening up a potentially tedious eternity. Besides, isn't it worth the wait...?
Plump plum suckled into cherry mouth

Still getting interference from Odin's gathering wrath! Hope this doesn't post twice now.
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Plump plum suckled into cherry mouth

Still getting interference from Odin's gathering wrath! Hope this doesn't post twice now.
Salty dewdrops mix with honeyed juices.

Yeah, it's getting to be a real pain, even for an immortal...
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Salty dewdrops mix with honeyed juices.

Yeah, it's getting to be a real pain, even for an immortal...
Shaft cool as marble stretches lips...
Right, missy, I'm off. Some of us have work to do...
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Old 02-07-2013, 05:03 AM   #135
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Shaft cool as marble stretches lips...
Right, missy, I'm off. Some of us have work to do...
Suckling divine nectar from godly stem,
Cherry mouth, petalled tongue caress plum.

Hope the pleasure is worth the pain. Come again soon, woncha
(That's Dr. Missy, to you. ROFL.)
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Old 02-07-2013, 06:07 AM   #136
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Suckling divine nectar from godly stem,
Cherry mouth, petalled tongue caress plum.

Hope the pleasure is worth the pain. Come again soon, woncha
(That's Dr. Missy, to you. ROFL.)
Reaching back to finger succulent oyster.

Thrusting hips while strumming swollen pearl.

OK, so I'm bored. Sue me...
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Old 02-07-2013, 06:32 AM   #137
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Reaching back to finger succulent oyster.

Thrusting hips while strumming swollen pearl.

OK, so I'm bored. Sue me...
Quivering like stringed instrument while licking

Fabulous! the prose gets more purple all the time. They must keep you in that boring job forever if it's going to inspire you like this. ROFLOL.
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Fabulous! the prose gets more purple all the time. They must keep you in that boring job forever if it's going to inspire you like this. ROFLOL.
Curved fingers plunge inside, eliciting gasp.

See, I usually think of purple prose ad a bad thing, but I'm guessing from the context you're ok with it...

Besides, there's only so many pussies one can take. Well, not literally, obviously...
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Old 02-07-2013, 08:09 AM   #139
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Curved fingers plunge inside, eliciting gasp.

See, I usually think of purple prose ad a bad thing, but I'm guessing from the context you're ok with it...

Besides, there's only so many pussies one can take. Well, not literally, obviously...
Alabaster thighs clasp 'hand of god' ,
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Alabaster thighs clasp 'hand of god' ,
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Dammit! Really kicking myself over missing the "hand of God" gag... You can tell I'm an atheist football non-supporter.
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Slick fingers mirror lance's piston motions.
Dammit! Really kicking myself over missing the "hand of God" gag... You can tell I'm an atheist football non-supporter.
But did it make you splurt your hot drink through your nose? Please say it did!

Moans hum, tongue works godly shaft.

OMG! That made my day, making up that one. It was all so DULL! and then I thought of that.
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But did it make you splurt your hot drink through your nose? Please say it did!

Moans hum, tongue works godly shaft.

OMG! That made my day, making up that one. It was all so DULL! and then I thought of that.
Curling fingers find sweet spot, rubbing...
"DULL"? Gee, thanks... <wilt>
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"DULL"? Gee, thanks... <wilt>
Inspired...Invisible Woman reaches around Loki...

(Sorry... best I can do with raging headache. Still on ginger ale and saltines.)
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(Sorry... best I can do with raging headache. Still on ginger ale and saltines.)
America looses touch with Woman, Invisible,

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Inspired...Invisible Woman reaches around Loki...

(Sorry... best I can do with raging headache. Still on ginger ale and saltines.)

Not you, Steve! silly work stuff


Hands in unexpected places cause tremors.
In ecstasy plunging down over godhead.

Oh, Neko, welcome back! So sorry about headache.
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He's quickly lassoed by stars-and-striped figure.
"Tell the truth," Wonder Woman snarls.
"Been playing around, thinking all unseen?"
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Inspired...Invisible Woman reaches around Loki...

(Sorry... best I can do with raging headache. Still on ginger ale and saltines.)
God puzzled by unseen finger strokes...

Divine sac tightens as godseed rises.

Good to see you back, Neko.

Better step up the carbs. Loki gives quite the workout...
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Faith in purple prose restored... <perk>

Hmph. I'll let you off. This time. But only 'cos Neko's... erm, distracting me...
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Divine sac tightens as godseed rises.

Good to see you back, Neko.

Better step up the carbs. Loki gives quite the workout...
Assassinator throat plunges down in pleasure-fest

F'ing A! Your new profile pic is the second-best moment of my day. The day was gross but those two moments were ... golden! Hope the head-dress is staying on
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F'ing A! Your new profile pic is the second-best moment of my day. The day was gross but those two moments were ... golden! Hope the head-dress is staying on
Loki roars as divine nectar's loosed.

Milked by throat and invisible hand.

Thought that might put a smile on your face and a tingle in your pants... Can't believe you missed the helmet gag opportunity, though. Could do better, Dr Missy...
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