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Old 02-03-2013, 11:10 PM   #101
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Old 02-05-2013, 03:49 AM   #102
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Old 02-05-2013, 06:58 AM   #104
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All this crass consumerism is making me frisky...
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Old 02-05-2013, 06:59 AM   #105
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... iron thews. Loki's lance pulses menacingly...
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Old 02-05-2013, 08:31 AM   #108
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Old 02-05-2013, 09:40 AM   #109
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... iron thews. Loki's lance pulses menacingly...
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moon milky drops of anticipatory nector
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Making widow's pearl shimmer even brighter...
She breathes a web-light whisper wish,

"Loki, just pucker up your lips."
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Old 02-05-2013, 01:03 PM   #114
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"Loki, just pucker up your lips."
Cruel sneer crosses those agile lips.

"Turnabout is fair play, little mortal..."
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Cruel sneer crosses those agile lips.

"Turnabout is fair play, little mortal..."
"Free me, to belong to you,
And pleasure your vile unquenchable lust."
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Loki replaces shackles with his body.

Pinning Widow like a violated butterfly...
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Pinning Widow like a violated butterfly...
Fluttering breast heaving to breast, she
Slips her slender hands, slides down ...
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Slips her slender hands, slides down ...
Impatient lance pierces Widow's waiting wound.

Inch by inch, exquisitely spearing her.
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Inch by inch, exquisitely spearing her.
Spasm of agony/ecstasy grips mortal

(Have to suck cock next superhero!)
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Godly girth brings tears. And rapture.

See, I was going to make you, but then you begged to be unchained. Being naturally suspicious, Loki opted to "pin" you down so you didn't try some assassin shizzle on him.

Anyway, who says you still can't...?
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Godly girth brings tears. And rapture.

See, I was going to make you, but then you begged to be unchained. Being naturally suspicious, Loki opted to "pin" you down so you didn't try some assassin shizzle on him.

Anyway, who says you still can't...?
Phone rings, flame hair tosses hurriedly,
"Hawk, interrogation is going, uh! perfectly!"
Alabaster body heaving in bloody rapture

Mmm, I await the gymnastics that will allow for that one from this position with panting anticipation!
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Godly lance divinely stabbing Widow's wound...

... shaft glistening but not with blood.

Ooooh, priddy! Nice find, Widow.

Neko, why hast thou forsaken us? There's such a thing as taking invisibility too far, y'know...
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Ooooh, priddy! Nice find, Widow.

Neko, why hast thou forsaken us? There's such a thing as taking invisibility too far, y'know...
Clenched pearly teeth on bloody lip
Alabaster thighs wrapped around divine hips

Yes, where are the others? Lurking while working, probably
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Alabaster thighs wrapped around divine hips

Yes, where are the others? Lurking while working, probably
Lance withdrawn. No little death yet...

Straddling Widow, proffering his sodden shaft.

Well, I know I am...
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