I've left my share of feedback (hopefully constructive criticism) in this thread and feel it's only fair to throw one of my stories out there for review.
I posted this story back in November, and it didn't get a lot of views, comments, or votes. It's a consensual non-con role playing story involving an unlikely couple:
The Rules of the Game Ch. 01
Any and all feedback is appreciated.
And if you are bored or ambitious, I've posted a couple of more chapters in the series:
The Rules of the Game Ch. 02
The Rules of the Game Ch. 03