Greetings kind editor,
I'm in search of an editor for a LitErotica submission. This is a follow-up to my previous story, "My Father's Second Wife" (<http://www.literotica.com/s/my-fathers-second-wife>). I should have gotten an editor to look that one over too, but I was new to this and didn't know better.
It's an insect story, told from the perspective of a young women, who is being drawn into her father's larger-than-life world. It's not fantasy, but it is fantasticóborderline James Bond fantastic. This story will make more sense if you read the first story, but that certainly isn't necessary.
The first story garnered positive feedback with requests for more. This second part is in response to that. I'm also outlining a third installment and possibly a prequel. So there may be more, if they continue to be well received.
I'm primarily looking for grammar, spelling, and construction help. If, however, you're inclined to contribute your thoughts on character development, plot, pacing, dialog, or prose you'll find a receptive audience.
This story is NOT short. It's currently hovering around 25,000 words. My previous story was 18,000. My writing tends to be leisurely and descriptive, so please be aware that this is a sizable job. I am also in no rush to have it edited.
If this is something you'd be interested in, please let me know.