Originally Posted by soflabbwlvr
You have the beginning and the end of the story, but what about the middle? How did the ex-jock become a slave? That's the part you need to work on to make this into a story.
He met the girl, and planned to treat her like crap like he does all women. He even told her so, that he'd treat her like a piece of shit, yet she'll soon be eating out of his hand, that's what a stud he is (in his mind). She takes the challenge.
At first, she gives him the greatest sex of his life: awesome fucking, mind-blowing blowjobs, incredible anal, etc. But then she starts teasing him: just bringing him to the brink, and then making him make promises to her before she'll finish him off.
At first, the promises are small: he has to go down on her for half an hour. He has to take her out to an expensive dinner. Then they get more and more intense: he has to wear panties under his clothes all day at work. He has to wear a but plug to an important meeting. He has to deep throat a dildo in front of her without gagging. Either he complies, or she cuts him off, and by now he is addicted to her pussy, her mouth, her ass, etc.
Her requirements keep escalating. He has to pick up a random guy at a bar and blow him in front of her. He has to let another random guy butt fuck him. He has to go into his favorite tavern in drag and act like a slut. But he is so addicted to her poon-tang that he cannot refuse.
Finally, the special day arrives: The High School Reunion. And you know the rest of the story......