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03-15-2013, 10:04 PM
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11
In progress...
So Chelsea Does My Reading
You look at my palm.
There you see
a heart line
a head line a life line
a hand opened to you,
enveloping your hand.
Somewhere there is a tree
newly nestled into earth
that will erupt straight
from the ground to the sky.
I know that is cliché.
I know. I know.
But can you tell me
whom I will meet
to finally stub this loneliness
away like a dead cigarette? I'm not sure this is worth continuing.
Part of the reasoning behind this particular challenge is that good poems take some time to be built, or be constructed.
I know. Right now I'm trying to build some kind of Frank Gehry image.
Not working, is it?
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Not a drop of her blood was human,
But she was made like a soft sweet woman.
—Dante Gabriel Rossetti
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03-16-2013, 10:46 PM
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11 redux
Revision. Slight title change, moving the strophe breaks around: So, Chelsea, Do My Reading
Look at my palm.
There you see
a heart line
a head line a life line
a hand opened to you,
resting in your hand.
Somewhere there is a tree
newly nestled into earth
that will erupt straight
from the ground to the sky.
I know that is cliché.
I know. I know.
But can you tell me
whom I will meet
to finally stub this loneliness
away like a dead cigarette? This makes it more uniform, which it not an intrinsic value, but I think (well, know) it needs major work.
Happy Ides of March (yesterday), anyway.
None of you are Caesar, after all.
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Not a drop of her blood was human,
But she was made like a soft sweet woman.
—Dante Gabriel Rossetti
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03-17-2013, 01:22 PM
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Really Really Experienced
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Render unto Tzara, oops, Caesar...
Turning
It is that time of the year,
to wax poetic vehicles
as spring nears.
I've always been a lazy waxer,
one coat and a quick buff
is usually sufficient.
Sounds like a blog blurb,
blowing hot air up your ass,
but then spring does bring out
the inevitable wild hare in us.
Even the old rabbits:
Kick their heels in jubilation,
twitch whiskers anticipating
the beginning of the season
where green grass grows long
in such untamed vast profusion.
Give chase under Goddess moon
then couple in frantic pairs,
freshing that brings new issue
and a message in bladed nests
that it ain't so bad to be a hare.
Celebrate the years long turning
with fecund ribald contemplation
and mad musing gemmed melancholy
leaving young to the care of Artemis
and hop away to dine on fresh greens
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Double posting to NP if anyone cares
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"True glory consists in doing what deserves to be written; in writing what deserves to be read."- Pliny the Elder
"Words have the power to both destroy and heal. When words are both true and kind, they can change our world."- The Budda
"I'll never be a poet"- The Harry
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Reason: saw some things
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03-19-2013, 07:07 PM
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Really Really Experienced
greenmountaineer is online now
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12
Frankie Says Sonny's Working Late.
Yeah, Right! And I'm Veronica Lake,
you tell that to Sonny, Frankie.
Wait a minute, don't hang up!
You were my wise guy in high school, Right?
Remember Papa's barber shop?
me licking the peppermint stick
when Papa wasn't looking?
Pretending I was a bimbo, I said,
who still has a nice set a lungs by the way,
and how you sang Sherry Baby?
Frankie, you tell that sonofabitch
all I got now is an empty house,
a mansard roof on a Jersey cliff,
and his goddam view of the Hudson,
Tiffany chandelier, Big Deal!
And you tell Sonny the satin sheets
he bought me last week at Macy's,
I'm here with my digital camera on,
loving my finger where it ain't Sonny
for all the Corteses in Brooklyn!
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03-22-2013, 11:52 PM
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On reflection.....
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12 - The Poets Place
Empty bottles, long ago enjoyed,
stand on every surface, on top of
stacked papers, one holding a yellow rose
picked that day. And books, books everywhere,
pile upon pile, higgledy-piggledy on the floor,
on sturdy shelves bowed with weight and age.
On his disorderly desk, under ashtrays
drowning in hours of thought are
papers layered like last year’s leaves.
Here is the birthing place of poems,
some stillborn, abandoned under angry shrouds
of ink. Some merely zygotes, a twinkle
in the poet’s eye, an uncertain future
in a perpetual past.
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03-23-2013, 09:21 PM
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Dandy
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cherry blossom ready
....to open—
...............where is the sun?
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Not a drop of her blood was human,
But she was made like a soft sweet woman.
—Dante Gabriel Rossetti
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03-23-2013, 10:23 PM
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12 revision
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tzara
cherry blossom ready
....to open—
...............where is the sun?
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cherry blossom ready
...............but where is the sun?
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Not a drop of her blood was human,
But she was made like a soft sweet woman.
—Dante Gabriel Rossetti
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03-25-2013, 02:10 PM
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Poet Chick
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try try again
42 degrees. Soon comes rain.
The little woman holds an umbrella,
the man in black is shadowed,
standing within the cottage door.
Fingers ache sure as her painted face
is chipped, braids faded, dusty old
tchotchke planted on the sill. Outside
a mountain is revealed: naked trees
jumble through hollows the roads
twist the bumpy night undulates
blinks yellow then red. Stubborn
the moon and I stand back, a woman
shadowed in her kitchen folding
long bones to knit together church
inside, watching the icon still more
alive beside a globe submerged
in certain winter.
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Anger and tenderness: my selves.
And now I can believe they breathe in me
as angels, not polarities.
Anger and tenderness: the spider's genius
to spin and weave in the same action
from her own body, anywhere --
even from a broken web.
~Adrienne Rich, Integrity
Weep
Poems
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03-26-2013, 06:58 PM
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Really Really Experienced
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Patrick's Doppelgänger
Perhaps I'm just a psychoactive
dream where a nurse put toadstools in
your intravenous stage four drip
after which the clock on the wall
decided to melt at midnight,
a good time to talk of our future
in Meredith, now a nervous wreck,
who after amniocentesis,
says she's really, really a Buddhist
and wants to name us Rinpoche,
or you're really drunk as a skunk,
the last of two fingers in your cup,
after Shaunessey smuggled you in
a fifth of Clontarf Single Malt
you thought might numb your esophagus
or perhaps I Am That I Am
you swore was a bad dream of Moses,
drinks before dinner 5:00 P.M.,
ten years ago September 4th,
willy-nilly is here again.
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03-27-2013, 12:14 AM
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Really Really Experienced
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A Conversation with Roget
..
I am troubled Roget;
my mind searches
for that perfect word
it resides there within
your precise organization.
a seldom found treasure
Pretenders to that ideal
scarce convey intent
leading to the glacial falling dominoed
inspection of other possibilites
I fear, Roget,
age is catching up with me
Now Browning's rage
grows less with passing days
and when darkness falls
I practice for that pleasant sleep
and always, when the sun rises once again
eyes open with peace in my heart
Can you feel my frustration
as you stand mute, while I
see not your wisdom weighted words
Continuims silent march into the future
is the only sound heard
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"True glory consists in doing what deserves to be written; in writing what deserves to be read."- Pliny the Elder
"Words have the power to both destroy and heal. When words are both true and kind, they can change our world."- The Budda
"I'll never be a poet"- The Harry
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03-29-2013, 06:19 PM
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The House We Lived In
settled like our marriage—
the corners all looked square and true
but if you dropped a coin on edge
in the center of the floor
it would roll south to slip
under a bookcase or a skirted chair
like a fugitive escaping into Mexico
minutes ahead of FBI pursuit
still, it sheltered us from rain
and while its furnace was never really hot
we didn’t freeze, either
or so we told each other
to justify our investment
we never really got our money back
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Not a drop of her blood was human,
But she was made like a soft sweet woman.
—Dante Gabriel Rossetti
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03-29-2013, 11:16 PM
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On reflection.....
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13 - Need
The taste of her remains
on my lips and tongue
like some exotic spice
burning a memory and madness.
To look up and see her arching neck,
the bridge to her beauty, to feel her
taut thighs tensing under my hands,
the need in me twitches tactlessly.
Her moans and cries wake me
to find an empty bed and
an unmanageable monument.
It is a tangible tenderness,
an actual ache that stays
with me all day, an urgency
only she can salve with her
warm presence beneath me,
her legs wrapping my eagerness
and her gasps of pleasure.
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04-01-2013, 04:37 PM
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Really Really Experienced
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Hair Care ...week?
Somethings men never think about
until it slaps them in the face
for example, the simple barrette
cheap ass manufacturing
quite expensive
but doesn't keep my hair in place.
shoddy merchandise,
seen on bedraggled women everywhere
and now on me.
Forget a better mousetrap,
improved hairclasp please.
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"True glory consists in doing what deserves to be written; in writing what deserves to be read."- Pliny the Elder
"Words have the power to both destroy and heal. When words are both true and kind, they can change our world."- The Budda
"I'll never be a poet"- The Harry
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04-02-2013, 02:56 PM
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Really Really Experienced
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A Night in the Life of St. Lizzie
Lizzie wakes up when Miami sunset
creeps under Collins Avenue causeway.
"For criminy sakes," says Lizzie, "too late
for my syrup at Dade County clinic"
which could have helped her negotiate
for roses she sells to the late night men
whose wives pretend their husbands don’t lie
whatever they say or smell like in bed.
At midnight she takes a tithe from her profits
to buy a last supper for Harry
who doesn't have enough for a Greyhound
and hopes to stow away back to Chicago,
persona non-grata at the depot
before she bought him a Salvation Army
button down shirt and new pair of sneakers
she laces up outside near the graffiti.
After she baby wipes each of his hands
Harry selects diet Coke over Pepsi
she buys from machines next to the men's room
where basketball shorts are down to the knees
for cash and sex on the beach with bikinis;
she prays they'll sleep there instead of her ramp,
her next destination but first a bistro
dumpster to dive for her new tramp whose fear
told her last week he's Vincent Van Gogh
until Lizzie whispered love in his ear.
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04-02-2013, 08:33 PM
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On reflection.....
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14 - Hubris
Man!
He has taken
feathers by the ton
for ladies’ hats and fur-
belows, skins from big cats,
bear and bison for warmth and
honeyed vanity. Sea creatures large
and small, from tiny seahorse to giant shark,
netted for the betterment of man, for medicine,
established and delusional. Ground horns or penises for
perceived potency and ivory for the mantle beside the ormolu.
He'll plunder Earth’s assets until he strides alone across a barren world.
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04-03-2013, 07:01 PM
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T2's poem resembles a mountain, therefore...
Ardmore
Rescued from the top of the world
Artifacts that we scatter about
Careless humanity
Artists recycle Nepal
Selectively
One mans trash...
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"True glory consists in doing what deserves to be written; in writing what deserves to be read."- Pliny the Elder
"Words have the power to both destroy and heal. When words are both true and kind, they can change our world."- The Budda
"I'll never be a poet"- The Harry
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04-05-2013, 09:47 PM
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Meryl Streep
There’s her cheekbones, of course,
and that remarkable ear—
how she can echo, mockingbird-like,
regional twangs,
and all the wrong word orders
natural to those unblessed with English.
But just look at her eyes:
she has smile lines about her eyes,
and that tells you she’s been happy.
And that even her Sophie was more joy than tears.
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Not a drop of her blood was human,
But she was made like a soft sweet woman.
—Dante Gabriel Rossetti
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04-08-2013, 04:24 PM
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Eliot's Anglo-Catholic Confession
The seed was bad, ergo the blossom
I knew how to say in Lungworm or Latin
as if I were born to the manner.
A pound is a pound, Bloke, the rent was due
I paid from a love song, absent love,
and they named me a gastromancer
but how I wish my stomach had purred
more and fur balls twisted my tongue
inasmuch frogs now live in my throat.
So bless me, Father, before I croak.
Bleistein never had slime in his eye.
I don't really know beginning from end.
April is kind, but something is cruel.
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04-09-2013, 02:46 PM
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Poet Chick
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inching along
Never trust a small man
with a big cigar. Nor homilies.
It takes a heap o' heapin
to make a heap a home
Mother often said. Paradox
is peachy except when it is
not. I'm a social hermit but
I don't care to discuss why
I'd rather divide the moon
into metaphors foaming
at the surf, a doll's face,
a banana flung at the sky some
thing about phase or phrasing
and by and by time after
time sometimes side by side
tautologically speaking
the dawning morn pushes that
fading smile off the map and I
flicker in the distance.
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Anger and tenderness: my selves.
And now I can believe they breathe in me
as angels, not polarities.
Anger and tenderness: the spider's genius
to spin and weave in the same action
from her own body, anywhere --
even from a broken web.
~Adrienne Rich, Integrity
Weep
Poems
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04-09-2013, 04:39 PM
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thanks for the memories
bitch Thatcher died, a bitter woman
so we’re drinking beer for old times sake
reminiscing about spreading jam on bread
then cutting through the woods
past the police cordons and state spooks
who, never having read Karl Marx
were busy seeking him out
the narrative was spreading tendrils
story lines creeping like triffids
a shaggy dog story getting out of hand
the lady named us the enemy within
it was a state gong we accepted with pride
scoured the newspapers for yet more lies
lies we’d collect like collecting cards
our raison d’etre grew each day
the drudge work, like a broken shackle
had become a memory of a tethered past
when we’d tramp across the yard like broken men
our future before us mirrored our past
but for the moment we were free
no serf, no slave, no servant of the rich
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04-10-2013, 11:37 PM
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On reflection.....
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15 - The first bee of spring
Was she the chosen one
to leave the hive,
test the air,
set the course?
Returning with peculiar maps
of nectar itinerary,
decoded for her sisters
in a spastic shimmy.
The bee-line to blossoms
startled open by reflected heat,
azalea and iris, jonquil and crocus.
Perhaps the sun woke her
from her honeyed slumber?
Brisk and eager
before the summer drowse.
Was her effort worth the early rise
or are the blooms still dreaming,
hoarding pollen for a later date?
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Reason: ....for butters and others
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04-11-2013, 01:23 PM
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Poet Chick
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Trickeration
I'm sick of synchronicity
tired of your name
appearing on some errant
record label an appliance
ad and no longer merrily
rolls the day because now
you're here.
One never knows coincidence
perhaps a message
susurrating by in a song
sneaky but clear enough
to trigger my imagination or
the voices in my head
depending on one's outlook.
Imagination you tricky little devil.
Now that he's here let's figure
out his problems and pronouns
and make him go away.
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Anger and tenderness: my selves.
And now I can believe they breathe in me
as angels, not polarities.
Anger and tenderness: the spider's genius
to spin and weave in the same action
from her own body, anywhere --
even from a broken web.
~Adrienne Rich, Integrity
Weep
Poems
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04-11-2013, 09:03 PM
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wind ripples daffodils—
........they nod, they nod,
....indifferent
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Not a drop of her blood was human,
But she was made like a soft sweet woman.
—Dante Gabriel Rossetti
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04-12-2013, 09:35 AM
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5 - Fourth Date
As meals went, it seemed
ideal in terms of being just
what he envisioned for the
first time he'd cooked for her,
Italian...spaghetti with meat
sauce and freshly baked bread
with garlic and butter enough
that he could have seasoned
the pasta by wiping the bread
on it, but Murphy came over
for the night and the pasta was
a jumble of non dente that
had a sauce with too much onion
and sausage that was over fenneled,
while the bread had such a crust
to it he'd have sworn he grabbed it
from the day-old baguette rack as
opposed to the fresh, Italian-style
loaves that they baked daily at the
grocery he usually frequented, But
the wine had been a good choice,
and she'd smiled at his dessert,
which had lead to her dessert, and
that was really the whole point.
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04-12-2013, 01:58 PM
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Harry selects diet Coke over Pepsi... (Never!)
Myopic
Do you think I am blind,
or is it you that can not see
how words thought to be obtuse
cut most viciously?
Oh the duality of vision,
imperfect, limited, limitless,
whose perfect definitions hide
the sight of otherness.
Insinuations, flawed perception -
why can't it just be as seen?
Forever search veiled meaning
hidden in poetic themes.
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"True glory consists in doing what deserves to be written; in writing what deserves to be read."- Pliny the Elder
"Words have the power to both destroy and heal. When words are both true and kind, they can change our world."- The Budda
"I'll never be a poet"- The Harry
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Reason: A well constructed box is still a box
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