Old 12-30-2012, 08:17 PM   #1
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I'm part-way through a story series that's really getting on my nerves, because it's being filtered through my wife's preferences and particular take on the subject matter (Incest/Taboo). I write for fun, for pleasure, and as a way of escaping what I do for a living, so there tends to be gaps in the delivery of the episodes as I can only write when I'm off alert. My problem seems to be that with this particular story thread (In Love With Lori Ch 1-7 so far) it's largely based on our experiences, with certain major facts and back-story elements changed to protect the deviant, and changing it on my wife would piss her off mightily.

The trouble is, I hate this story, the way it's written, the meandering thread, the fact that so much of ourselves has been woven into it to titilliate her, which her indoors seems to think is the way to tell a tale. So, anybody out there foolish enough to want to take on this god-forsaken, mindlessly sex-driven trudge though my wife's weirdness and spin a little reality into it?

I'm just tempted to leave it gathering dust, but I have to live with her and at some point I had high hopes of actually getting some, if I dump this, I can confidently predict I'll be getting none for time to come. Someone please take pity on a fellow man with a wife who won't accept she has no talent....
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Old 12-30-2012, 09:33 PM   #2
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If you're looking for an editor, you might have more luck in the Editor's Forum. If you're looking for someone else to write this story, you might have more luck in the Story Ideas forum.
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Old 12-30-2012, 11:55 PM   #3
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It seems to me it's your wife who needs to take over the story.
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Old 12-31-2012, 12:42 AM   #4
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If your wife is so determined to have things done her way in the story, I sincerely doubt if she would take the advice of an editor who suggested changes either. Then again, maybe it's your input she resents for some reason. It appears to me from what you've stated that you function more as a typist than a full fledged writing partner even though you present yourself as being more skilled at writing.

You could take the Good Witch's advice and let her write her own story, or tell her her writing is sorely deficient and it's giving you a headache, or tell her to get an editor as she needs one desperately, or grit your teeth and continue on, or say to hell with it and drop the whole thing.

Where all this fits in the 'getting some nookie' phase of things I'm not sure, but IMO there are many other less convoluted ways to get laid.

Just sayin'.
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Old 12-31-2012, 03:42 AM   #5
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If your wife is so determined to have things done her way in the story, I sincerely doubt if she would take the advice of an editor who suggested changes either. Then again, maybe it's your input she resents for some reason. It appears to me from what you've stated that you function more as a typist than a full fledged writing partner even though you present yourself as being more skilled at writing.

You could take the Good Witch's advice and let her write her own story, or tell her her writing is sorely deficient and it's giving you a headache, or tell her to get an editor as she needs one desperately, or grit your teeth and continue on, or say to hell with it and drop the whole thing.

Where all this fits in the 'getting some nookie' phase of things I'm not sure, but IMO there are many other less convoluted ways to get laid.

Just sayin'.
Believe me I have tried. I have other, more personally interesting projects to be getting on with, and you really don't know my missus! Perhaps the only solution here is to drop the whole thing, because it's starting to make my eyes bleed! And you're right, I am little more than a sounding board for this particular load of noise, and I have suggested that she take it over, write it her bloody self but she keeps backing away. Perhaps if she were dealing with someone not personally involved with her and this load of cack she'd actually take some heed of suggestions, instructions etc. Otherwise, please shoot me now.
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Old 12-31-2012, 07:02 AM   #6
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Desperate Housewives introduced a plane crash to fix a similar problem. Was it a shoot out in Dallas? I forget but it killed off lots of the story. Under the circumstances maybe you had better kill off yourself rather than the missus though.

You'll have to write one more episode of course but every silver lining has its cloud.
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