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12-29-2012, 08:08 AM	#1
sirhugs Riding to the Rescue sirhugs is offline Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Thunder Bay, Ontario, Canada Posts: 32,594	Sequel Advice? I'm trying to write a sequel to my Christmas incest tale Stepdaughter's Christmas Gift for valentine's day. in the sequel, stepdaughter is on winter break from college & joins mom & stepdad for a ski vacation. What I'm unsure of is whether Mom knows that her hubby fucked her daughter Christmas eve? __________________ new story Melons in the Morning (Anal) the sort of shower every dirty old man dreams of. or explore my other perversions at: http://www.literotica.com/stories/me...ge=submissions

12-29-2012, 12:13 PM	#2
Carnevil9 Dogma Whisperer Carnevil9 is offline Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Location, Location, Location Posts: 3,910	Take your uncertainty and make it part of the story. Dad is in a tizzy, wondering if Mom knows or not. She drops some hints that make him think she knows, then others that make him think not. He gets more paranoid by the minute (and more horny). In the end.... well, that's up to the author of course, but I'd have had her know it all along and she was just teasing him until the time was right for a threesome. "Hush, darling. I knew all about it. Now shut up and fuck us both!" __________________ Think you’ve conquered your gag reflex? Read my latest drivel! Newest Story! - Beat-Off Buddies, Chapter 3 - A Trip Down Mammary Lane!! Porn With The Wind - Plantation owner's daughter jonesing for some hot Slave Cock! Pee Party! - Urine for some fun now!! Femme Fatale - Super Secret Agent meets a deadly Russian vixen bent on his sexual destruction! Hand Job Slut 1: The Awakening - The saga begins!! And Ends!! All eleven thrilling episodes are now on-line. An Hour Before The Wedding - She's not married just yet, and isn't wasting a minute of time And all the REST of my crap! Discuss my stories (or suggest new ones) at my new Carnevil9 Tumblr page! Now with PICTURES!!!

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12-29-2012, 12:31 PM

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Take your uncertainty and make it part of the story. Dad is in a tizzy, wondering if Mom knows or not. She drops some hints that make him think she knows, then others that make him think not. He gets more paranoid by the minute (and more horny). In the end.... well, that's up to the author of course, but I'd have had her know it all along and she was just teasing him until the time was right for a threesome.

"Hush, darling. I knew all about it. Now shut up and fuck us both!"

I like the idea of the Dad being really paranoid, it's Valentine's Day and they are getting ready for bed. The Mom comes out of the washroom dressed in lingerie and sexier than he's ever seen her before. She then reaches into the washroom and leads out the daughter in the same outfit.

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12-29-2012, 12:36 PM	#4
sirhugs Riding to the Rescue sirhugs is offline Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Thunder Bay, Ontario, Canada Posts: 32,594	Interestinggggg..... thanks. If I ever finish it, you can see how I played it... __________________ new story Melons in the Morning (Anal) the sort of shower every dirty old man dreams of. or explore my other perversions at: http://www.literotica.com/stories/me...ge=submissions

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12-29-2012, 04:13 PM

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I like the idea of the Dad being really paranoid, it's Valentine's Day and they are getting ready for bed. The Mom comes out of the washroom dressed in lingerie and sexier than he's ever seen her before. She then reaches into the washroom and leads out the daughter in the same outfit.

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