Old 01-28-2013, 01:04 AM   #1
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i need desperately to correct a really good story but my grammar is terrible please write now to [personal info prohibited per our forum guidelines]

so i can send the story - please help me

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Old 01-28-2013, 12:26 PM   #2
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What's the elevator pitch? If you were in an elevator with someone and had only until the doors opened to describe your story, what would you say? Might help entice people. =)
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