I don't like to submit my stories until I'm satisfied with them. I always run them through an editor first, so when he gets back to me, I'll end up fixing it up, then sending it back and so on, which takes a couple weeks usually.
Anyway, I thought I could post it on here first to get some feedback regarding the story itself, and not the technical details.
For anyone wondering, I have posted on Lit before, but decided to start anew with a fresh ID.
So here's my story. It's the first of a series that revolves around the nine characters mentioned. I plan on writing several stories in the series. I don't necessarily plan on directly connecting them, they just all revolve around the same set of primary characters.