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Old 12-15-2012, 09:08 AM   #26
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This is better than Eastenders....
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Old 12-15-2012, 09:55 AM   #27
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So exciting

I love love love what you guys are doing!
Would you share a few more story details?
It is so exciting. Enjoy every minute!
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Old 12-15-2012, 12:35 PM   #28
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I love love love what you guys are doing!
Would you share a few more story details?
It is so exciting. Enjoy every minute!
Agreed - this is fantastic great idea!
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Old 12-15-2012, 03:34 PM   #29
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I like where this is going. Very erotic.
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Old 12-15-2012, 04:00 PM   #30
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Where indeed?!
Let's find out what say you pertty lady?
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Old 12-15-2012, 07:17 PM   #31
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This exchange is completely at her instigation, beginning to end:


She stands in front of him, home from work
[she, smiling] did you miss me?
he nods, his eyes fixed on the top button of her shirt, which has slipped open, again
[he] i'm aching for you, I want to slide my hands all over your breasts
[she] yes please... i want your hands on me
[he] show me, let me see
she hesitates
[he] are you scared to expose yourself to me?
[she, quietly] no... not scared.. but nervous
she slowly undoes a button
[she] should I undo more?
he nods
she undoes the next button, and another, all the way down
standing there, in front of him, her shirt open.. his eyes are roaming over her body.
she feels exposed, hungry
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Old 12-15-2012, 07:22 PM   #32
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[he, hoping] to be continued
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Old 12-15-2012, 09:45 PM   #33
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[he, hoping] to be continued
He- Thank God she cannot see how badly I want her, her luscious skin in front of me, her tantalizing breasts within my reach. I hold stil as I might crush her with my desire.
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Old 12-15-2012, 09:57 PM   #34
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Wow. What a way start! Please keep it up.
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Old 12-15-2012, 10:06 PM   #35
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very sexy, dont stop now
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Old 12-16-2012, 10:19 AM   #36
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Part 2
she sees his reaction to her, the way he shifts in his seat.
It gives her a strange sense of power, a smile forms on her lips.
Feeling brave, she slips the shirt off her shoulders, dropping it to the floor.
She watches him, his eyes taking her in.
Her hands move to her breasts, cupping them, offering them to him
[she] do you want to touch them? They're soft, full.. warm..
She scarcely believes she's saying the words that come out of her mouth
[she] they're yours, if you want them
He stands up, striding behind her, his hands over hers
[he] yes, mine.
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Old 12-16-2012, 10:26 AM   #37
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I love the combination of words and stories, keep going.
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Old 12-18-2012, 12:13 AM   #38
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I can't believe this thread has slipped off the front page of Ampics! Perhaps it's too slow for many, or maybe not graphic enough... But I, for one, want more. Please...?

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she sees his reaction to her, the way he shifts in his seat.
It gives her a strange sense of power, a smile forms on her lips.
Feeling brave, she slips the shirt off her shoulders, dropping it to the floor.
She watches him, his eyes taking her in.
Her hands move to her breasts, cupping them, offering them to him
[she] do you want to touch them? They're soft, full.. warm..
She scarcely believes she's saying the words that come out of her mouth
[she] they're yours, if you want them
He stands up, striding behind her, his hands over hers
[he] yes, mine.
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Old 12-18-2012, 01:48 AM   #39
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What I love about this picture is that it's very innocent, with that light blue shirt, your curves and soft skin, and soft hair...yet at the same time, it's very erotic with that black bra and unbuttoned top.

Amazing work.

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Old 12-18-2012, 03:16 AM   #40
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outstanding miss! i super cant wait to get to know you both and yes.. see them girls released
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Old 12-18-2012, 03:32 AM   #41
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Absolutely Stunning. Look forward to seeing more.
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Old 12-18-2012, 03:36 AM   #42
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I can't believe this thread has slipped off the front page of Ampics! Perhaps it's too slow for many, or maybe not graphic enough... But I, for one, want more. Please...?
I definitely second that, love the way this thread is being played out please keep it going the tease value is incredible!
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Old 12-18-2012, 09:18 PM   #43
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He kisses her deeply while cupping her breasts. He hears her intake of breath as he reaches around and pulls her deep into his chest.
He "I want you"
She "I want you too"!!
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Old 12-19-2012, 09:47 AM   #44
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[he] bad news… I finally got her to strip for you and the pics turned out grainy (too dark?)
[she] good news… now I am aching to show off - wait for me
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Old 12-19-2012, 10:22 AM   #45
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[he] bad news… I finally got her to strip for you and the pics turned out grainy (too dark?)
[she] good news… now I am aching to show off - wait for me
Oh, we will...
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Old 12-20-2012, 04:24 PM   #46
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What is wrong with you, people...?

A much deserved bump for an inexplicably underappreciated thread. ADD is, apparently, alive and well on Lit...
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Old 12-20-2012, 04:36 PM   #47
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Love the pics and can't wait to see more!!
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Old 12-21-2012, 12:37 AM   #48
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How do I feel?

[he] are you itching to show off the latest pictures?
[she] i don't know if I'm itching to show them off
[he] how do you feel?
[she] I feel... shy, scared and yes, a little excited. The pictures reveal so much... I don't know if I'm ready.
[he] the new photos are delicious. I want to share the beauty and excitement - let others feel the some hunger and delight that I feel. For now, they get to see and enjoy, while you and I get the thrill of knowing that you are wanted. And who knows, one day, it may be more than merely showing...
[she] more? Do you want to share more than just images? Do you want to invite them into more than just our fantasies? To watch me as I take him into my mouth hungrily, or as I share my first kiss with her?

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Old 12-21-2012, 12:40 AM   #49
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love the photos..can't wait to see what is next to be revealed..
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Old 12-21-2012, 01:02 AM   #50
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Nice thread!
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