I've been tempted to ask that here before ad now I am.
I've written two chapters, the first real prose I've ever written, I think. People seem to like it. I get some views, some votes, always fours and fives (according to my maths) , but I've only ever had one comment. Anonymous and by email. It was, in tot:
More plz? Damn character limitations.
Positive, I grant, but somehow... Unsatisfying. I feel ungrateful in a way, but... I was perhaps hoping for more from a comment (more vowels even would be nice...)
I really would like some critique, advice, criticism (praise? no sense denying that, everyone likes praise). My Author name is ZoZa
and the story is called My Travels with Clytemnestra
, although I think there must be several better titles I could have used. It's in Sci-Fi & Fantasy. It's got fairly strong watersports in it, so I won't blame you if you want to avoid it for that reason.
The first chapter is here:
The second here: