Old 11-09-2011, 03:22 PM   #1
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Cheating scenario

This is my first time on 'Story Ideas' and i would appreciate if a writer can construct a story around this theme -

I just got a place for myself in this new city. Its been a week, i have been spending most of my time at college, no friends till now and certainly no girlfriend in the new city.
One day when i am coming home late, i see this really beautiful/ hot girl getting out of a car, we enter the elevator together....

Construct the story based on the above scene. Also, it turns out to be that the girl recently got married i.e. a couple of months back and is promiscuous, plus she is a bit hard to get as she is really proud of her body and the kind of guys she sleeps with..

The more details you put in, the better it is. Like the ambience, clothes worn etc.
Thanks in advance.

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Old 11-10-2011, 11:06 AM   #2
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No response yet..
Is the idea SO bad?
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Old 03-15-2012, 12:40 AM   #3
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This is my first time on 'Story Ideas' and i would appreciate if a writer can construct a story around this theme -

I just got a place for myself in this new city. Its been a week, i have been spending most of my time at college, no friends till now and certainly no girlfriend in the new city.
One day when i am coming home late, i see this really beautiful/ hot girl getting out of a car, we enter the elevator together....

Construct the story based on the above scene. Also, it turns out to be that the girl recently got married i.e. a couple of months back and is promiscuous, plus she is a bit hard to get as she is really proud of her body and the kind of guys she sleeps with..

The more details you put in, the better it is. Like the ambience, clothes worn etc.
Thanks in advance.
perhaps more than once, he sees her fucking another man in the apartment or sees evidence of her fucking like cum running down her legs.
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Old 03-15-2012, 01:35 AM   #4
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He sees her in the other apartment all the time...

and assumes the man living there is her husband. Then he finds out he is wrong. She is married but the guy in the next apartment is not her husband. He starts to fantasize about her. He starts to follow her, stalk her. He wants to find out more about her. He sees her real husband and wonders if he should tell the guy about his wayward wife, but decides against it.
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Old 03-15-2012, 05:30 AM   #5
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She's an escort using the apartment as her 'business' address, and he doesn't realise this. He spends ages chatting her up and when he is eventually invited in he is horrified when she tells him the price.
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Old 12-04-2012, 09:02 AM   #6
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how about he finds out that she is a highly paid LadyBoy .. and takes him on a joy ride filled with variety!
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Old 12-04-2012, 09:13 AM   #7
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I also vote for the whole escort scenario
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