Well, I read your story, yes there were spelling and grammer errors. I would work on that, distracts from the story sometimes. The storyline was not bad, the idea of it, it needs some work to make more believable. I prefer stories that are at least believable. You could have continued the story after she woke from her hangover and made it get more interesting. I think you did ok for a first time writer. Work on professionalism, including the spelling and grammer and fill in some gaps to spice the story up.